Here are my thoughts thus far!.. Fantastic art work has been done, I do like the character designs and setting a lot, I think the writing for the first half wasn't doing a good service, as in following a similar storybeat(RYT and Soulcreek connection) to that extent wasn't a good choice to make a first impression. Otherwise, the ladder half definitely improved the story, a drinking game to get to know the characters was a brilliant idea, we got a lot of perspective on what the characters are like in one simple scene. But yeah, my take is that this has really high potential to be good with more polish added onto it!