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really great vn! much has been said already but the art style was wonderful, I love how expressive and cartoony the characters were. One thing I especially liked was the sprite of Isa/Sleeper's head poking out from the left side into the frame, that felt so classic cartoon. The intensity of the interactions and the contrast between Gloria and Limno's internal states was so good. Gloria is such a mystery and I'd love to hear more about her. The ending was such a cliffhanger and I'm sad there wasn't more, but I felt like I got to see so much of the characters and their complicated interactions together. 

Very cool short VN! first of all, the art style was very pretty, I like the watercolor look of the drawings, and showing Sunkiss through the seasonal cycles, it really fit that theme of time passing and the kind of "doom" for flowers and winter. The meta twist in the end was very clever and interesting too. Really enjoying these toxic yuri stories about all consuming love and ownership, and this sort of fairy tale-esque story was really well suited for it. We don't get to see the "outside" world in this one, but the hints from Sunkiss talkign about how roughly dandelions are treated added some fun creepiness and scariness in the stakes Fawn is presenting to them. Thanks a lot for sharing!

Really neat VN, I was intrigued by the premise when first was introduced during TYVNJ but finally was able to play it. I loved the music and the way we got to see the relationship develop over the course of the weeks, through seeing these small snippets of conversation outside of work and outside the rest of their lives. The smut addition was also really good and a great addition to understanding the characters. The reveal at the end was devastating, the part about some "thing" re-entering the car, the dread and dissociation of it all was so heartbreaking. 

The photos and kind of views of the rides, how you can only see barely what's in front of you in themidst of dark really captures that night ride feeling very well. Slightly unrelated, but kind of made me think of a lot of the  long night driving scenes from April (2024) which also carried a similar quietness and apprehension.

Thanks so much for sharing, and congrats on the jam win!

really enjoyed this demo! I liked the format of the story and how things are slowly being revealed. The music and "oppressiveness" (like the other commentor said) give a really neat feeling to it.  I love the art style, it's so unique and detailed and fits that vintage feeling very well. That office feels so evocative, and I love the expressions of the sprites! 

One thing I would've liked would be an auto button (not sure if i just wasn't finding it?) but in general can't wait to see more of the story!

Really enjoyed this first installment! The character dynamic between the main two is so good, and this is my first time reading something with voice acting--it added a lot to the story! I love stories where cheerful people wrestle with their guilty/ugly feelings while really wanting to love... also the "twist" near the end with the eyes was genuinely unnerving but also humorous. i loved it hehe, and love the shift from more everyday behaviors into unnerving feelings and ominous anticipation for what's to come! 

The 3d movements and such were very dynamic, it took me a while to get used to it at first but I like how they were utilized a lot, especially during Yoyo's internal monologues with himself. 

I did feel the beginning I was a little confused as to what was going on at first since the combination of the attempted jump + everyone joking around was ??? to me, but it quickly established everyone's character soon after in a fun way so that was good.

Thanks a lot for sharing, and will def keep an eye out for updates XD

thanks so much!!