Really enjoyed this first installment! The character dynamic between the main two is so good, and this is my first time reading something with voice acting--it added a lot to the story! I love stories where cheerful people wrestle with their guilty/ugly feelings while really wanting to love... also the "twist" near the end with the eyes was genuinely unnerving but also humorous. i loved it hehe, and love the shift from more everyday behaviors into unnerving feelings and ominous anticipation for what's to come!
The 3d movements and such were very dynamic, it took me a while to get used to it at first but I like how they were utilized a lot, especially during Yoyo's internal monologues with himself.
I did feel the beginning I was a little confused as to what was going on at first since the combination of the attempted jump + everyone joking around was ??? to me, but it quickly established everyone's character soon after in a fun way so that was good.
Thanks a lot for sharing, and will def keep an eye out for updates XD