Oh i see, i hope they're doing better now
TigreMolhado
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Oh god, i can't, i love Otto soo much, what a man... ngl when i started reading the rewritten, i was scared that Otto was gonna change too much, the first time he appeared it did scared me, but the rewrite did started growing on me with time, I'm looking forward to see how you are gonna handle him, and also the situation with Jayce and the love options? That's gonna be an interesting plot (also handsome cry baby bear? Is he gonna have a route???)
Is also cool to see that Emmanuel finally got into the university in a different version of his world, it was a good surprise
As for the writing it just needs some adjustments and tweaks, some of the wording (at least in english) don't makes soo much sense even on context and there are some continuity errors who may make the story less coherent
But overall this still is one of my favorites VN's and i wish you luck developing the story in the future!
(Otto please let me simp for other characters, my heart can't stop melting when i see this gorgeous, small and handsome man on screen)
Damn, that scene at the beach was so heartwarming, the internal monologue of Ben got me on my toes, but then the yellow eyes which i I kindly call "Guilt" came in to the clutch.
Also maybe spoilers
Continuing in this scene, it is to be believed that the red eyes are, like a manifestation of suicide thoughts and/or desires? The entire scene made me come to the conclusion that the story's is not only about dealing with guilt, but also moving past the desire of Suicide the characters may have, although i can't say that for Nate and Bryan, but I feel like that is, since this update had a lot of mentions to that, if that's not the case I'm really excited to the prospect of the killer/entity being cought, the desire for knowledge is killing me, also, where's zach?...