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The character setup is very strong here.

I like how the wedding premise immediately creates pressure before the story even begins, and both love interests seem to carry different kinds of hidden tension. Tristan feels controlled and unreadable, while Oscar seems lighter on the surface but not necessarily safer.

That contrast works really well with the manor mystery and gothic tone.

Hi Icy — I saw your post about BLAM! and the Story/Narrative Writer role. The project sounds really interesting, especially the character-focused sci-fi angle and the vertical slice goal.

I’m a game writer focused on character writing, dialogue, and opening moments for indie games. I’d be especially interested in helping with character interactions, intro scenes, and narrative hooks for the first level/world introduction.

Here’s my portfolio: https://little-box-of-madness.bolt.host

Happy to talk more about the scope and see if my writing style fits what you’re building.