Indie game storeFree gamesFun gamesHorror games
Game developmentAssetsComics
SalesBundles

TheWorldOfCM

36
Posts
1
Topics
24
Followers
41
Following
A member registered Apr 23, 2018 · View creator page →

Creator of

Recent community posts

Thank you so much Gmx0 for taking the time to play my game. I really appreciate that you gave it a try. Yes I'm not a native English speaker but I know that's not an excuse to not improve in this language. I will improve as a developer overall and will do my best again next time. Again I'm glad and I'm happy that you gave it a rating of 4 considering that there are a lot of things to improve. I will keep on improving. Thank you and have a great day! ☕

Well designed and presented game. I'm impressed. ☕

Very useful and simply amazing. I hope you have a standalone application (exe) for this. ☕

(1 edit)

Thank you so much Pixality for giving the time to play my game. I'm happy that you played more than one of my games. I'm grateful that you enjoyed it. Have a great day. ☕

IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT (PLEASE READ)

Delete the old file if you guys already downloaded it. I checked the first download file yesterday and my anti-virus detected an infected file which is a music file that I got from my old laptop. So I made a decision to hide the download button because I can't change/edit it due to the ongoing contest. This may cause me disqualification to my entry but I rather be disqualified than put any harm to someone's computer. I hope you understand my decision. Anyway, if you still want to play the game, I made a new download link. Just visit the game page. Thank you...and whoever wins deserves it. ☕

Well done. The visual fits the game so well. Good job. ☕

Refreshing and enjoyable. I like it. Good job. ☕

Well done graphics. Beautiful ☕

(6 edits)

This is the better and improved version of the game.

Download it HERE.

  • Added Face images to all characters.
  • Improved some dialogues.
  • Fix some bugs.
  • Fix some grammar errors.
  • Add an edited Title screen.
  • Add some music.

*I can't update the game yet because of the ongoing IGMC 2018.

c(m)~

I can't open the RAR file. Says error.

Congrats for the 2nd place! c(m)~

Great job! And congrats! c(m)~

Thank you so much MikeyBlighe for playing The Firefly! I really appreciate it. I subscribed and followed you. I will improve the game in the future. Best of success to your channel. Again thank you! c(m)~

Back To The Overworld

A Game by Jennifer Barrios Tettay

Review by Carl Marajay

..........

Good Points:

-The player seeing the Title Screen has a sneak peak of some of the characters of the game which will create interest towards the player. "Who are these characters? I need to find out!"

-I like the new placement and format of the Title menu, not the usual centered box title menu. You put a shutdown which is good for easy exit when fullscreen mode.

-I like the Intro, good job. The fog blends well with the background image plus the relaxing guitar, I can also hear a violin? It felt like some war or battle has ended. Sometimes it felt like an ending scene already.
cool, well done.

-The font is also readable.

-I like your wordings and the choice of music.

-The scene of Draco and Despoina with the background music of a woman singing kind of sets the mood and interest of the player even more.

-Changing of the text size really helps to make the player focus and felt like the player is really visualizing in his head the right emotion and emphasis of some words. Good job.

-Watching and reading the intro felt like some huge event has ended and a new beginning has come. The sun is setting and hiding between the rocky mountains. Felt mellow and peaceful. Good job.

-I like the classes of each characters. Not the usual classes in videogames. Interesting choices. Good job.

-I like the sprites at the battle. Very cute and chibi and not the usual RM chibi sprites which is refreshing for me to see.

-While in battle, I like that you did not clutter the screen with unnecesarry HUDs. Not overwhelming at all. Good job.

-I like that you teach the player one step at a time like the sleeping effect, to avoid overwhelming the player. Good job.

-The character faces and portraits are beautiful.

-I like the conversations between characters. Felt real. Good job.

-I like that you put a kind of treasure that player won't expect it to be always a treasure chest but it can also be a trap chest. Good job on that.

-Esmeralda is hot mamacita lol.

-The convos were funny lol.

-I like the animation effects scene. I felt like playing a 2D and 3D game at the same time lol.

-Ahhh...I like the scene at the lake and the BGM fits well, very soothing and calming. Good job.

-I like what you did in the town, very refreshing for an RM game. I do like the guitar BGM with birds chirping at the town. Very relaxing. Fits for a resting area. Good job.

-At the Crypt, the atmosphere and BGM blends well. You have given it an identity. Good job.

-You gave each character an identity too. Good job.

-Good job in adding a variety of mini games.

-You introduced and connect the tutorials to the story which is smart. Good job.

-I like the decision based through paths. Felt dynamic and non-linear. Good job.

-I like the dialogue choices too. The player will really think. Some were obvious though like 95% of the right choice is to spare the priestess' life, the other choice is I think just to give the player another path for experimentation and what if I did this 5% choice? but still good job.

-I like the icons, well presented. Good job.

-I like that in every area, you change the BGM and the atmosphere in result, it gives each its own identity. Good job.

-At the Cave, I like the mini game of Belrios. I like the variety of mini games. Good job.

-I like some background images too like the blue cave.

-I like the timed attack in the battle though easy (I realized I change the difficulty at 50% in the settings). Good job.

-Gorgeous character sprites and portraits.

-NPCs are interesting too. They each have different introductions. Good job.

-I like that you put tutorials as book items for the player to scan anytime. Good job.

-Playing it more than an hour and no errors at all. Good job.

..........

To Improve:

-The Title Screen Image has some inconsistent graphic design. The castle does not fit well with the character images. Kind of out of place. You can still improve the title Screen.

-The Title BGM felt like I was in a cowboyish country feel. Maybe because of the opening intro sound. That's just me. But as I listened to the most part of the music, it kind of giving me a happy feel and a battle sound.

-I'm not sure but I think ... is the correct one and not .. - add one dot (.) I'm not sure.
I'm talking about the sentences in your intro.

-I suggest you put an option whether to skip intro or not specially if it's a dialogue intro. For old players who wants to revisit the game and doesn't want to go through the intro again.

-The dialogue scene where Jackie introduces himself, I hope you change the BGM temporarily. With Jackie's dialogue, it does not fit the mellow dramatic BGM playing while he wants to slay some enemies. Maybe change the BGM to a medium fast sound or something that the player will remind them of Jackie's personality because of the music. First impression matters.

-The character introductions of Jackie, Liless, and Vrazhar does not fit well with the BGM. The character's dialogues were kind of jolly while the BGM playing is mellow and peaceful.

-The intro of "Eye" like the other characters does not fit with the BGM. The dialogues of Liless and Eye felt mellow which is I think wrong because the BGM should have been some upbeat or alive music. It really destroys the focus and connection of the scene to the right emotion and expression.

-The word 'Notification' in Draco's dialogue kind of out of place for me. Reminds me of social media. Maybe it's just me but I hope you can replace it and find a much better word that fits the world structure of the game.

-"Both girls playfully giggling, apparently having fun." excerpt from the game while a mellow peaceful dramatic BGM is playing. Does not blend well.

-At the forest...I hope you put a nature SE like a hush wind and some birds chirping. It adds to the atmosphere and believability of the game's area. For me the BGM at the forest/woods does not fit with the map. That's just me.

-The BGM really distracts me from feeling the right dialogues of the characters. I don't know but the BGM at the forest is too fast that instead of reading and visualizing the character dialogues, the BGM gets into my head. Maybe a less slower BGM will do.

-At the battle, add a choice box at the end of the tutorial to either repeat the tutorial or continue the battle. Some players may accidentally press the key without reading some instructions. It is better to have an option for the player to read it again or put an item at the game's inventory for the tutorials, maybe a note?

-The BGM while adventuring is distracting and does not fit with the character conversation. The conversations were great but the BGM kind of removes that right feeling. The BGM became a distraction instead of complementing the dialogues of each characters. Maybe it's just me and my personal taste.

-The Background does not fit with the character portraits/faces but I know you intended it that way. It has some charm but I suggest you choose a little cartoonish background but still 3D looking one. I felt like the characters were cut-out and pasted lol but I know you decided it that way so no issue really. Just want to point that out.

-The BGM felt repetitive, no variation, speed change, or change in the scene's personality. Yep I'm also guilty of this one lol.

-The lake scene with the mysterious girl kind of short? I hope you add more!

-Naming the town a "ghost town" while having a relaxing BGM may not fit the theme of the area.

-"Pizza" and "Cola" in this kind of game world may be funny but it may also destroy the immersion of the game. I suggest you rename a pizza to something that fits the game world. Names like "Kabara" or "Pizzari"...just comes to mind.

-At Liless' Status menu, there's a mispelling of the correct word "COUNTLESS" with "T".

-The mini game at the Crypt is good but I suggest you put their faces instead of card images. It will connect to the narrative well.

-The wordings "Delete", "Game Over", and "Notification" kind of destroy the immersion of the world. You put an interesting characters but you gave them some words that does not fit their world.

-The main quest of gathering your allies and let them return home felt uninspiring for me. Maybe give them a random freewill? I mean some allies will return and some stays and give reasons why.

-The allies' dialogues were repetitive and just the same. Make them personal and unique too just like the party characters. Add some dialogues.

-Some dialogues were funny but immersion breaking like the alchemist's dialogue "wrong game."

-The game has no measurement how many allies were there. I suggest put an indication of your goal. Put the ammount of allies to be rescued so that players will know how much are still left.

-At the half of the playthrough, I have no idea where to go or how many allies were left. I felt looping into areas without any clear path and no indication whatsoever.

..........

Final Thoughts:

I love the game, very refreshing from the usual RM game that I've played. No errors for more than an hour of playing. The party characters and NPCs has unique charms on its own. The MCs has different identities and uniqueness. I love the dialogues though there were some small issues (personal taste), I still enjoy the game. The battle system though the usual side view, you added some changes which I appreciate. No dull moments but I kind of lost in some areas without any clear path to take. For a game jam, this is well done. I love to see this game improved even more and released as a commercial one. Great job!

Thank You for the chance to play your game. Best of success!

c(m)~

Back To The Overworld

A Game by Jennifer Barrios Tettay

Review by Carl Marajay

..........

Good Points:

-The player seeing the Title Screen has a sneak peak of some of the characters of the game which will create interest towards the player. "Who are these characters? I need to find out!"

-I like the new placement and format of the Title menu, not the usual centered box title menu. You put a shutdown which is good for easy exit when fullscreen mode.

-I like the Intro, good job. The fog blends well with the background image plus the relaxing guitar, I can also hear a violin? It felt like some war or battle has ended. Sometimes it felt like an ending scene already.
cool, well done.

-The font is also readable.

-I like your wordings and the choice of music.

-The scene of Draco and Despoina with the background music of a woman singing kind of sets the mood and interest of the player even more.

-Changing of the text size really helps to make the player focus and felt like the player is really visualizing in his head the right emotion and emphasis of some words. Good job.

-Watching and reading the intro felt like some huge event has ended and a new beginning has come. The sun is setting and hiding between the rocky mountains. Felt mellow and peaceful. Good job.

-I like the classes of each characters. Not the usual classes in videogames. Interesting choices. Good job.

-I like the sprites at the battle. Very cute and chibi and not the usual RM chibi sprites which is refreshing for me to see.

-While in battle, I like that you did not clutter the screen with unnecesarry HUDs. Not overwhelming at all. Good job.

-I like that you teach the player one step at a time like the sleeping effect, to avoid overwhelming the player. Good job.

-The character faces and portraits are beautiful.

-I like the conversations between characters. Felt real. Good job.

-I like that you put a kind of treasure that player won't expect it to be always a treasure chest but it can also be a trap chest. Good job on that.

-Esmeralda is hot mamacita lol.

-The convos were funny lol.

-I like the animation effects scene. I felt like playing a 2D and 3D game at the same time lol.

-Ahhh...I like the scene at the lake and the BGM fits well, very soothing and calming. Good job.

-I like what you did in the town, very refreshing for an RM game. I do like the guitar BGM with birds chirping at the town. Very relaxing. Fits for a resting area. Good job.

-At the Crypt, the atmosphere and BGM blends well. You have given it an identity. Good job.

-You gave each character an identity too. Good job.

-Good job in adding a variety of mini games.

-You introduced and connect the tutorials to the story which is smart. Good job.

-I like the decision based through paths. Felt dynamic and non-linear. Good job.

-I like the dialogue choices too. The player will really think. Some were obvious though like 95% of the right choice is to spare the priestess' life, the other choice is I think just to give the player another path for experimentation and what if I did this 5% choice? but still good job.

-I like the icons, well presented. Good job.

-I like that in every area, you change the BGM and the atmosphere in result, it gives each its own identity. Good job.

-At the Cave, I like the mini game of Belrios. I like the variety of mini games. Good job.

-I like some background images too like the blue cave.

-I like the timed attack in the battle though easy (I realized I change the difficulty at 50% in the settings). Good job.

-Gorgeous character sprites and portraits.

-NPCs are interesting too. They each have different introductions. Good job.

-I like that you put tutorials as book items for the player to scan anytime. Good job.

-Playing it more than an hour and no errors at all. Good job.

..........

To Improve:

-The Title Screen Image has some inconsistent graphic design. The castle does not fit well with the character images. Kind of out of place. You can still improve the title Screen.

-The Title BGM felt like I was in a cowboyish country feel. Maybe because of the opening intro sound. That's just me. But as I listened to the most part of the music, it kind of giving me a happy feel and a battle sound.

-I'm not sure but I think ... is the correct one and not .. - add one dot (.) I'm not sure.
I'm talking about the sentences in your intro.

-I suggest you put an option whether to skip intro or not specially if it's a dialogue intro. For old players who wants to revisit the game and doesn't want to go through the intro again.

-The dialogue scene where Jackie introduces himself, I hope you change the BGM temporarily. With Jackie's dialogue, it does not fit the mellow dramatic BGM playing while he wants to slay some enemies. Maybe change the BGM to a medium fast sound or something that the player will remind them of Jackie's personality because of the music. First impression matters.

-The character introductions of Jackie, Liless, and Vrazhar does not fit well with the BGM. The character's dialogues were kind of jolly while the BGM playing is mellow and peaceful.

-The intro of "Eye" like the other characters does not fit with the BGM. The dialogues of Liless and Eye felt mellow which is I think wrong because the BGM should have been some upbeat or alive music. It really destroys the focus and connection of the scene to the right emotion and expression.

-The word 'Notification' in Draco's dialogue kind of out of place for me. Reminds me of social media. Maybe it's just me but I hope you can replace it and find a much better word that fits the world structure of the game.

-"Both girls playfully giggling, apparently having fun." excerpt from the game while a mellow peaceful dramatic BGM is playing. Does not blend well.

-At the forest...I hope you put a nature SE like a hush wind and some birds chirping. It adds to the atmosphere and believability of the game's area. For me the BGM at the forest/woods does not fit with the map. That's just me.

-The BGM really distracts me from feeling the right dialogues of the characters. I don't know but the BGM at the forest is too fast that instead of reading and visualizing the character dialogues, the BGM gets into my head. Maybe a less slower BGM will do.

-At the battle, add a choice box at the end of the tutorial to either repeat the tutorial or continue the battle. Some players may accidentally press the key without reading some instructions. It is better to have an option for the player to read it again or put an item at the game's inventory for the tutorials, maybe a note?

-The BGM while adventuring is distracting and does not fit with the character conversation. The conversations were great but the BGM kind of removes that right feeling. The BGM became a distraction instead of complementing the dialogues of each characters. Maybe it's just me and my personal taste.

-The Background does not fit with the character portraits/faces but I know you intended it that way. It has some charm but I suggest you choose a little cartoonish background but still 3D looking one. I felt like the characters were cut-out and pasted lol but I know you decided it that way so no issue really. Just want to point that out.

-The BGM felt repetitive, no variation, speed change, or change in the scene's personality. Yep I'm also guilty of this one lol.

-The lake scene with the mysterious girl kind of short? I hope you add more!

-Naming the town a "ghost town" while having a relaxing BGM may not fit the theme of the area.

-"Pizza" and "Cola" in this kind of game world may be funny but it may also destroy the immersion of the game. I suggest you rename a pizza to something that fits the game world. Names like "Kabara" or "Pizzari"...just comes to mind.

-At Liless' Status menu, there's a mispelling of the correct word "COUNTLESS" with "T".

-The mini game at the Crypt is good but I suggest you put their faces instead of card images. It will connect to the narrative well.

-The wordings "Delete", "Game Over", and "Notification" kind of destroy the immersion of the world. You put an interesting characters but you gave them some words that does not fit their world.

-The main quest of gathering your allies and let them return home felt uninspiring for me. Maybe give them a random freewill? I mean some allies will return and some stays and give reasons why.

-The allies' dialogues were repetitive and just the same. Make them personal and unique too just like the party characters. Add some dialogues.

-Some dialogues were funny but immersion breaking like the alchemist's dialogue "wrong game."

-The game has no measurement how many allies were there. I suggest put an indication of your goal. Put the ammount of allies to be rescued so that players will know how much are still left.

-At the half of the playthrough, I have no idea where to go or how many allies were left. I felt looping into areas without any clear path and no indication whatsoever.

..........

Final Thoughts:

I love the game, very refreshing from the usual RM game that I've played. No errors for more than an hour of playing. The party characters and NPCs has unique charms on its own. The MCs has different identities and uniqueness. I love the dialogues though there were some small issues (personal taste), I still enjoy the game. The battle system though the usual side view, you added some changes which I appreciate. No dull moments but I kind of lost in some areas without any clear path to take. For a game jam, this is well done. I love to see this game improved even more and released as a commercial one. Great job!

Thank You for the chance to play your game. Best of success!

c(m)~

The Last Will

By Nasran Salleh

Reviewed by Carl Marajay

................................................

Good Points:

-I like the Title BGM. The piano is relaxing. Good job.

-The story is very relatable.

-I like the BGM of the intro.

-The tint kind of gloomy which is perfect for the game's atmosphere.

-Great use of tilesets and sense of mapping. Great job.

-I love the narrative. It's sweet yet sad at the same time. Great job.

-I felt sad and nearly crying. Great job on the feels.

-Short yet sweet and sad game. Not really sad but more on life's rawness.

-I love the game's simplicity that focuses in touching the heart of the player playing the game.

-Subtlety emotional feels.

........................................................

To Improve:

-You can put an option whether to skip intro or not.

-I hope there are more conversations between the husband and his wife.

-Hope you add more past cutcenes where the husband and wife were having a great moment together so that players can have something to hold on to, to connect from.

-Hope you add more and improve the game.

-Establish and add more content and surely the game will shine even more.

.........................................................

Final Thoughts:

Thank You so much Nasran for letting me play your game and also for mentioning my name. Really appreciate that. I hope you can improve and add more contents in the near future. Looking forward to it. I love the messages of a sweet, sadness reality, and love.

Great job again Nasran and more games to come.

cm c(_)~

Thank you so much for doing a let's play! subscribed. Yes I made the game without any plan, just right into the moment. Again thank you!

Thank You so much for playing my game! 

POOOOOOOORRRRRN!!! xD

Thankz :D

Thank you Jennifer! :) c(_)~

Zezezezezez thankz man for your zupport! xD

Done, added you to my thank list. :)

I suggest you play other RM games so that you can get some ideas. It is much better if you experience it yourself. :)

The gameplay is much better than some RM games that I've played before. You can work on the story and characters. Great music too. Good job!

Thank You Michael! zezezezezeze xD

Thank You Jennifer! zezezezezeze xD

(1 edit)

Thank you JenniferHaydenRaven, Yee, Nostro, and MikeyBlighe for taking the time playing my game. Your feedback and comments will definitely help me to improve the game even more. I will take all your words into consideration and note everything. Again thank you. I'm grateful.

~ cm 

I see, thank you so much for playing my game. I will consider your advises, noted. I will improve the game. Again thank you. :) 

Thank you so much for playing my game. I really appreciate it. Noted and I will improve the game. Again thank you. :) 

(1 edit)

Sorry for some English grammar error. I already fixed them and updated the game. :)

Thank you HaydenRaven for playing my game and for your feedback. Thanks also for making a Let's play video. Have a great day. :) 

Thank you so much Jennifer for playing my game. Thank you for your help too. Have a great day.  :) 

School Rush by Nasran

Review by CM

Intro:

Hey Nasran, you're so fast. You were the first maker to finish our 10 minutes game challenge. It was a quick play but still good job! Congratulations.

Here's my quick review about your game. Read it with a grain of salt. Oh by the way thanks for that mention in your ending credits. :)

--------------------------------------------------

Review:

(1) I like that you compiled it to .exe than having a lot of folders. I highly recommend makers to do the same. Good job.

(2) At the Title Screen, when I went to Options and wanted to return to the Title, there's an error message. Error: (see image attached)

Solution: I created a folder 'www' and inside that folder I created another one 'save'. The error's gone after.

(3) Try to put a custom logo to your game(s). Even if it's just a short game, custom logo will add to the game's content.

(4) The Title screen is simple and the music fits the theme. Nothing more to say. You can still improve it in your future projects.

(5) I like the font, very readable and big, fits the lively game.

(6) The mapping is too boxy but carry on. You can improve it in your future projects.

(7) Some shadows felt weird haha but carry on.

(8) The battle system is the default one, I like the different colors of monsters. Nothing more to say. You can improve it in your future projects.

(9) I like the battle BGM, upbeat sound.

---------------------------------------------------

Summary:

All in all the game was quick played obviously because of the 10 mins rules but still good job for finishing a short game. You have the potential to improve and be a much better designer and developer. Just continue on learning and enjoying what you love. You have the sense of good design, I can tell. Practice, learning more, improving more.

Suggestions:

School Rush...you can add school elements for monsters like terror teachers or living calculator hahaha, just suggestions though. For puzzles, school subjects, number puzzles.

End Message:

Thanks Nasran for joining our RPG Biz 10 Minutes Challenge. I hope you enjoyed and learned something from this challenge. Cheers. :)

You have completed the challenge. Congratulations!

~ cm 

Hide & Seek

Developed by Jennifer Barrios Tettay

Reviewed by Carl Marajay

..........................................................

Good Points:

-I like that you put a custom icon for your game.

-I like the customization you make in the Title screen.

-The Title BGM reminded me of a 8 bit games.

-Overall the Title Screen and the music fits the game very well.

-The tilesets fits the game well.

-I like the game mechanics. Not the usual RPG made in RPG Maker.

-Very educational.

-The music is good, visual is good too.

-The replay value is good.

-I enjoyed it even if it's a quick game.

-Overall, I enjoyed the game and even played it more than once.

..........................................................

To Improve:

-Maybe put more subjects and topics.

-I suggest you let the player choose the subjects/topics s/he wants to play.

...........................................................

I love the game though quick play because of the challenge but still I enjoyed it. Thank you for mentioning my name in your game though not required you to do that. Good job Jennifer for a good game. It has a potential to be put as a mobile game and be enjoyed by kids and young adults. 🙂 

~cm 

Congrats for completing the 10 minutes challenge Nasran. Good Job! cm

I love the mapping and battle menu design. Best of success! 

Oww..salamat ^ ^ ..I will improve the game, thanks! Followed you. 

Gorgeous Mapping and interesting story line. Best of success. :)