Your Art is very vivid in color and has an amasing Style. I will look into it to work with it maybe I can cast a magical game out of it :) Thanks for the beautyfull work!
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1.Vizuals: When I saw your videos on Discord I wanted to play this imediate! Now I played it and want to tell you that the Car and the Character are both wonderfully made. On the other hand, if you do not have enough time, consider using assets. You do not need to use the asset strore or package manager for that. Unity uses so called FBX data for Models and most of the Free and purchaseable 3D models are FBX ready. You just need to drag and drop them into the project folder in unity and they get initialised (include the texture file :D ) You can see clearly on your game that the Time for Modelling stuff was not enough, but you made a very cozy looking game with funny shaped trees :D
The Signs would have neded a backside on some of them to read them from both sides.
2. Audio: I hat a very unpleasent ticc on the motor sound which made the game unplayable for me with sound because it sounded like someone scratched my inner ear. it is like wrrrrrrrr ITCH wrrrrrrrrrr ITCH ...... and so on. Everything else was very well done and fitting!
3. Mechaniks: The core Gameloop is working perfekt! you made the pickup, the drop in the car works, it shows where to go, you can enter the car and exit it, very very nice! I just had issues with the camera, most of the time when I was walking and not driving. but thats a issue you can fix easy with more time I guess. Overall very well done!
Summerized: You made a very cute and nice Game that is playable and fun. Some more flashy FX or more flashed out worled with people other cars and cities would make this game into a nice little Steamrelease ^^
Good Job and Happy new Year!
Feedback:
Visual: Its hard to see what you can move on and what is just decoration. To make this a little more visible some highlights on the edges where you can move would be nice and the background items a little darker compared to it.
Audio: Your SFX are sometimes somewhat out of the line. I think its great that you put them in, but maybe you find some better in the Assets from itch io for free which would make the game feel a little more cozy.
Mechaniks: It was not clear that the candles increes the flying time. maybe a effect on the player that indicats that you get something would be nice but the soundque told me that something is happening, was just not clear what until I saw the bar went up. I thought its a Checkpoint when I first got there.
The Flying feels okayisch - maybe you could set the physics gravity value a litte different when flying so you move a little more stable. felt a little like flappy birds sometimes xD
The Enemies could use an overhaul - I didn t understand Why they are there and what they do because they deal to less damage, so you basicly can ignore them when playing throough the game.
Little Bug: On one level you could get stuck with no flying time left. I needed to jump on an enemie and push my self with knockbacks back out there. that felt kinda uncanny.
You created a nice little christmas Game well done! I hope you learned alot in the prrocess. Good Job!
So I ended with over 750 People and never dropped my gold under 150 anymore... I thought I have a short look at your game... well that was at 10PM now its 3AM and I am in love with this Game. Its a very cozy, slighly challanging game, Wonderfoll made, Nice pixelart! Nice Mixture of tiles etc. it Works it has nice sound, I would set it on par with Dorfromantik but in Pixel.
This is a great game!
Wow - since this Game is one of my oldest I am kinda suprised that you pllayed it! Thank you for your feedback, and yes the bugs are allready known, although I was not able to fix them back then when I created this game. I thought about remaking the game sometime, but couldn t get the time till now.
Thank you very much for Playing and writing!
Nice Game very interessting idea, remindet me on "it takes two" cam could use some movement like when you get to the ramps. The Little Shadow circle under your character could be added to the enemy so you better know when aligned.
Would be cool if you make this into a finished prototype, with all 6 cables working. maybe some "energy drops" for the little battery guy ... yeah i liked it - short and cozy sweet visuals with a nice reminder towards a great game. You did well!