Loved the update!
TheFabulousBlasphemer
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You deserve quite a lot of credit. I have loved Dragon Age all these years, and during that entire time, I have despised Templars. I also have a rather strong dislike for being forced to play games as a human in any fantasy setting (I was incredibly disappointed being forced to play as Hawke in DA2). But despite all this, your writing is so well done, and the story intriguing enough for me to want to continue to read it. I do so hope you keep it up!
Would love to purchase this, but itch.io cavin to payment processors' draconic rules against sex prevents me from supportin a developer that I would very much like to monetarily support. PayPal is insecure and untrustworthy, and I will never allow them my bankin information. Just know that I love your work, and should you ever find another place to host it, that allows transactions by card, I will purchase in a heartbeat
This is an amazing, beautifully written start! I am so excited for more of this, it's so rare to have an IF that is told from a queer perspective and you have no idea how much this means to me as a gay man. I wish you all the luck in this and any future writing, you certainly have the talent worth pursuing.
I love this so much. I have played and loved Love the Guard, Be the King. Super interested in the Bloodchemist and the bit of mystery there. The one thing I wonder is if it's possible to get a "light mode" at all. I know this white letters on black background is popular but I have an eye issue where readin this combination for a length of time actually damages my eyesight. Would love to see a mode that's black letters on light background but I will suffer through readin as is if that's not possible because it's worth it.
Absolutely loved the update! Found some errors, when you choose the second option here,

you just get a blank screen, no text, no indication if that is the end of things
second error is this,

the problem here is that I had not previously spoken with any acolyte and was not told I was free to roam, was forced back into the cell and just left there (although the door was not locked)
