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As someone who also noticed this but am still willing to wait for an update, I think I know one reason why it feels that way.
Simply put, this is not a pony story. This is a generic stock story that could fit, literally any series; you could remove every pony and replace them with humans, and it would change absolutely nothing.
It's a decent enough story sure, but the issue is, that we bronies expect stories that focus on ponies. It's not the 'contemporary genre is friendship' it's "MAGIC is friendship," and while you could still have a low magic setting, this story fails to account for any of the things that would create a unique pony society. It is a similar reason as to why gen 5 is a total failure. And why gen 2 is just plain weird (ponies should probably never drive human cars, ever)
I'm sure a bit of rewriting of chapter 1, adding a scene here or there, and focusing on what makes the ponies special and not a simple stand-in for humans, could help a lot with defeating such concerns people have.
(Also everyone can claim they won an award for X, Y, and Z. I don't see anything here that would win an award on fimfiction yet. Maybe with some rewrites and revisions, but not yet. Fallout Equestria, Anthropology, Past Sins, this is not.)
Please don't take this as heartless criticism, as someone who is VERY invested in the art of lesbian horse, I want to see this project continue and succeed. I cannot be the only one making these games, simply cannot. These are just my thoughts though, and I'm a crazy insane eldrich creature far too obsessed with magical horses, so take all this with a grain of salt.
Thanks for that. That is nice to hear. I hope the executive order helps but its not full proof enough. We'll see where this goes, I think valve is likely to create the solution but that could take years.
As for this, currently working on what the next game plan should be. Maybe we'll revisit this game's concept soon.
it's not quite that. This game met my goals for the jam. It deals with a ton of complex systems and stats. I successfully learned how to do that. But with the current state of things for nsfw games, I can't even start to imagine making an update or a remake of this.
Hopefully one day things will be safer, cus I'd love to come back and make this a lot easier for folks to get into.
it was an experimental game for a game jam.
And also, as the creator, I completely agree. I really wanted to try and push the idea of complex stats and total freedom. It mostly functioned, but if I ever come back to this, i'm making it much more simple, as it turns out, neopets is beyond simple with its mechanics... I will try to be more close to that in the future.
Even I struggle to figure out how to play it on replays lol.
hmm, do you use word for editing? I know that some versions of word lack a word count tool, hence why I tend to use apache open office and private google docs myself now in days. XD
Thanks for the response.
Oh and you can also use Check Lint for a 'somewhat accurate' word count on renpy. this also helps find any bugs you have in your code.
second question: if I read everything right, the game is about 12.5 hours long. Do you have a total word count? I would estimate this would be about 120k words. but it would be nice to know for certain. Thank you XD
Edit: having finished a run on it, I think I may have misunderstood how this was made, this is probably nowhre near 120k words. with that said, I am still curious how many words it is.
actually I only added that sentence AFTER they hit my games. These are reindexed because these are all reuploads after I modified a few things to 'stay compliant and slave like'
the original versions are all gone from itch. Except the one they won't let me delete but they did straight up tell me to buck off with that one. I care not for the reasons anymore, as I've seen the way itch admins and even the founder really think. their discord is a disturbing mess. A scary disturbing mess. They believe too closely to collective shout for me to feel safe here.
So I am hoping, and praying, there will be an update after thing settle. Cus right now, the way they think is 'Jo Dirty should be considered porn cus it has comedy' and that is some scary shit.
In more positive news, gamejolt still allows for rated T games so their more creator freindly.
that sounds a lot more terrorfying then I initially thought. is this about the texas AI law, or is there something else that came out recently that is hitting art?
I know about the hate speech/UK censorship laws/Austrillia censorship laws/ etc
But this series has never been anymore offensive then Dragon Ball and I can still buy the dragon ball manga online, the uncensored one.









