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I really appreciate the feedback! I'm pretty new to writing visual novels. The only experience I have with them is playing them and also an attempt at a mod for DDLC years ago. As for the story, while I do know the overall direction I want the story to go, I don't have the small details planned yet. I'll try to work on the writing a bit and keep your thoughts on my narration in mind. I plan to have my next update finished in a little over a week, so if you wouldn't mind playing through it again if you have time, I would be grateful!

Thanks for the feedback! As of now, I don't know if the style will change. I do want to incorporate custom sprites and scenes, but I can't draw digitally to do it myself, and I can't pay someone for their work. I plan for there to be multiple endings, probably around 6. I also am adding in new characters in the next update. There will be Yuto, the emotional support character, who will be a friend to the player character, and Hina, the class gyaru, who will be a potential love interest. With the work I've done so far, I expect my next release to come in about a week or two. Can't wait to see what you think of Yuto, btw.

Hey, just gave it a short playthrough. Here's some feedback. The writing is great, and I'm not gonna talk about assets because as a fellow game designer, I know how it is lol. The only thing I can say that needs fixing is the transitions. You use 'with fade' when characters change expressions, but it would look a lot more clean if you used 'with dissolve' for expression changes or no transition at all. Fade is best used when bringing a character into a scene or taking them out.

Keep up the good work, and if you don't mind, check out my profile and give me some feedback on the demo for my game I'm working on. It's download only on pc btw.