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CHO I LOVE YOU SM LITERALLY,

-tem

OH ALSO EXPECT ALL ROUTE SAVE FILE NAME TWEET THREAD SOON
I'M WORKING ON IT

-also tem

♪(´▽｀) 

owo 1.0.1? what's this? i'll definitely make sure to update when it comes out! and yess simp forever and always >:D

!shpoilers~!

oof x_x dats a lotta variables,jesus
oohhhh so thats what it does... cool beans :D

i can tell you had a lot of fun writing these XD i wonder how many pieces of dialogue you wrote with a straight face (¬‿¬)
fnsjfnifao thank you cho and snasn, you both are great :D hopefully, after a while, i'll improve somewhat after having my brain stuck in the writer gutter for a while XP

yasss every part of a scene is important, and that includes the ambiance and music!!! really adds to a scene and makes it more impactful as a whole :)
3 or 4 tracks? owo? i know one of them is that glockenspiel cover, but i couldn't tell if any of the other ones were made by you or not :P they sound perfectly great to me

YES PET THE DOG!! >:Dc

such a dork he is. you did a very very great job at keeping him in character! this version of him is the one i fell for in the first place fjfaofaoi 

yOU'Re vERY WELcOmE!! I eNjoyEd eVerY minUte of iT!!! i shALL sTay DeTerMInEd!1!

you stay determined as well!!!! >:Dc

- tem (hoihohiohiho)

okay where do i start jesus christ

this game was an experience, to put it simply in words. i loved it so so much, and i only played through the pacifist route! (have no plans to play the No Love route as i have a feeling i will have a bad time, and also i can't just do that to our skeleboi ;-;)

i'm gonna keep this game on my laptop for a while so i can simp whenever, wherever ;)

you did such an incredible job on this game, cho. again, just wanted to let you know. you poured your heart and simping power SOUL into this, and it really, truly shows! :D

!spoilers up ahead, beware!

owo

the attention to detail was great, so many things to look at!! blue heart in the corner when sans talks, sans remembering what you say/do to him and talking about it (at those moments i wondered how you make the game do these sorts of things, like- how do you even make a game in general i'm just plain impressed xD), the small bits of dialogue from the original game but changed up a little bit to fit the scene... i have an eye for detail, and the fact there's so many here makes me happy. i'm happy :D
oh, and don't think i didn't notice the fact that when it was just sans in front of you, the background dims to shine a spotlight on him HAH i noticed way back when i was in new home on my first run and i was like '...wait, why is- oh my god cho, listen i don't want to stare into his eyes, i would like to stare at that darkened bookcase over there yes thank you HI GOAT MOM-

you wrote the scenes perfectly! (i'm kind of jelly honestly, i'm pretty sure i can't write anything like this xD) i could really feel as if i was in it. the monster crew's dialogue was really, really spot on, too! jesus this is basically them, you're great at keeping them in-character. felt like toby made another game, but it's just a version of undertale for the sans simps HAHAHAHA

also that scene during which you chose/reveal your core trait... i was just amazed, really. i mean, holy shite, that trait description was super accurate, and the fact sans 'seemed wide awake now' made me laugh XD
plus, during that SAVE his SOUL scene (dat one reminiscent of goat bro taking your friends and you having to restore their memories) and other things, the core trait you choose will be remembered and used throughout the rest of the route. i just- 👏👏👏 my detail-seeking heart is happy
for scenes like those, i thought about how much different those scenes would be if i had chosen any of the other 5 traits, and what the dialogue would be like
but i mean...
i could find out owo

now where do i even start with the music??? god the remixes you chose to use were great!!! literally, every time something new came on, i just vibed man, i just vibed
don't think i have to drag this out any longer, you've heard me scream about the music in my livetweets ;) it's just... 👌.
(also that glock gun spiel thingy cover you did for it's raining somewhere else is ( /◡‿◡)/♪ just amazing, i love it :D)

now the most important detail i wanted to talk about was... DOG YES DOG I GOT TO PET THE DOG BUT IT MADE THE BRIDGE FALL BUT I GOT SAVED BY SANS BUT MY LIFE GOAL IS COMPLETE I HAVE PET THE DOG!!!!

...no wait actually i wanted to talk about sans, but dog is important detail too >:D

anyway yes snasn where do i start with our one and bonely
okAY! one, he's super in character but also charming and seriously sweet. he's still the laidback, punny skeleton we all know and love (or LOVE), but now with the hots for you ;))))) two! deflection deflection deflection deflection deflection. don't think i need to say much else, three! jesus don't even get me started on the one-on-one scenes with him, it's just so fluffyyy and cute and romantic and it just made me fall for him all over again every time (´▽｀)

all in all, i had such a blast playing this and falling for sands undertable. the two years was so very worth the wait.

thank you for making this, cho. you're the greatest. :)

- yours truly, temmie 💙

hOihOihOihOihOihOihOihOihOihOihOihOihOihOihOihOihOihOihOihOihOihOihOihOihOihOihOihOihOihOi-

HELL YEAH CHO LET'S GO IT'S THE MOMENT WE'VE ALL BEEN WAITING FOR (ME ESPECIALLY) I'M DOWNLOADING THE GAME RIGHT NOW HAHAHAHAHA PREPARE FOR THAT LONG ASS COMMENT I PROMISED YOU AT THE START!!!!!

- tem

Hehe, prepare for what will probably be at LEAST one full 1 page long comment of pure praise when the game is finished :PP 

Good to know you're doing well on the game, as well as mentally and physically! xD You keep doing that :3

Game development seems fun and I'd like to mess around a bit with code but online school cancels all my lockdown plans for boredom xD And I'll probably have like, x2 tabs more open than you while messing around because I know nothing XD

Anyway, maybe I'll make a small project soon when I get the chance..

But that's enough from me! :P Remember to stay determined >:33

No problem!(*^▽^) 

Honestly, the original comment was WAY longer, but I didn't know if long comments were 'ok' with you yet so I just sort of... shortened it xD

Maybe I might make a playthrough if I get the time to, but that might be for a while.. twt Plus, my mic is terrible. xD I bet you would only hear my fan blowing in the background and static noise xDD

How's development going on the game, by the way? Make sure to take a break if you overwork yourself and drink plenty of water! Eat something if you need to! Take a nap! I dunno, just remember not to strain yourself! xD

(I really can't fathom making a visual novel as great as this, let alone a demo on my own! I barely know anything about game-making and coding, so it all seems bizzare to me.. Hmm.. Maybe I might give game-making a shot someday.

i really don't know xD)

And thank YOU for making this gosh darn masterpiece, you amazing person! ^^

AAAAAA THIS IS SO GOOD JDUSHAFWEJIK

I loved this so much! The dialogue was on. point. The fact you have accessibility options for everything is really thoughtful! The art was amazing, and everything in general is awesome!! (*^▽^*) I can't wait for the completed game! ^^ I'll wait for it for as long as I can until it's out >:33

Overall Rating: 11/10, would play over and over and over again!! :D

(P.S: I would have made a Twitch stream or Youtube video on my playthrough through the demo but I fear of messing up everything in audio so I didn't xD) 

(I have so many questions too but I won't voice them because people reading this might get spoiled xD)

(BTW I apologize for the long comment, I tend to go off-kilter with comments sometimes xD)