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This is a great story! I hope readers will enjoy this as much as I did. 
Well written, plays out really well, I thought it quite creative. DO READ THIS! 

This was Awesome, loved this! 
I'd like to see more from Ezra & Harvey.

OH, AWESOME! Wow, I forgot about this one! 
I'll definitely just restart the VN. I fell in love with Timber, he's such a good soul. <3 

Oh, Awesome another VN! 
Yeah  ok, good.... that makes sense. So is it recommended to watch all the routes to get more of the story that may not have been in Maelbjorne's route?
I'll read the other's routes and wait for the next VN and story!
THANK-YOU to you and your team for the fantastic work y'all do! I appreciate it alot and I know that not many take the time to give appreciation for all the hard work y'all do!!!! 

Wait.... Maelbjorne's route is done!!!? 
I enjoyed the story great work. 
Buuuuuut........ 

*** Possible SPOILER ALERTS and Fussing n moaning***

I feel like it got cut off, did I miss some things? Did all the other Avatars get killed, what about the revenge and resolve of Mekad. Did the kings not get well, or pass on to the Land of Tess? Speaking of Tess... I thought it was an objective to kill him too, Greatly disappointed that alot of loose ends don't get met, feel cheated on the story. 

I know right, so many big muscle werewolves! 
WOOF, I don't know who I'd want to romance first!
Would be nice. :)

Awesome, I'm so glad for this chapter, I've been waiting! 
What a great twist in the story, looking forward for Chapter 10. <3 
Thanks for the work you and your team put into this VN can't wait for more! 

I figured it out, I do not have the space on my desktop to download, game file it is too big! :/ 

Nope, still not.... same message :( 

No compatible downloads were found? 
I cannot download, is this still available? 
Would like to know why it don't work. 

Well said, I had like experiences in my first few cons. It's a live n learn lesson we all need. 

Sadly that is how my first few cons went.... totally hyped myself up and hoping for something that never happened. :/ 
I can totally relate with this VN it was me several times at cons, painful and overwhelming it's easy to get carried away. 
I have learned the hard way to go to cons with NO PLAN and just go with the flow! If it happens it happens, and I never get the "post con depression" cause I made the time I had there what I wanted and had a great time doing so with no planed agendas. 
Best advise I give is DO NOT MAKE "plans" they only fail and flake out last minute, just go and have a great time! 

This was great! A really good short.
Just a little saddened with the ending, was rooting for him to "get some". 
I'd like to see Swift go to another con, you did such a wonderful job with this VN a 2nd chance with that sexy fluffy boi would be very nice.  
I'll be checking out your other works.... THANK-YOU and your team for the story! <3

WOW.... where did that truck come from! (Chester's Route) Fantastic work y'all!

Do wanna point out a thought I had. Could it be possible to add a place in the Main Menu to view Mo's Scrapbook progress with the story? We saw a picture of working on it. It would be fun to see the 6 pages she's completed. 

**** could be a spoiler..... Just a background I thought was out of place.  ****

I thought it might be a Bug or there is no art yet. Back ground for dinner and tour of Chester n Dave's house is the Poolhouse locker room background. 

"Chester and I opted to eat inside at his kitchen table. Dave and Randy join us. Everyone else was too wet to come inside."

If no art just switch it to the patio pool view would work too. 

Oh, aaaaaaaaah.... wait found it! I figured it out, my computer kept opening another tab. Awesome, just read through it...... yeah, I feel like Boomer sometimes.  :D

I cannot get to BMZ, another window opens with the comic in my pictures there is no BMZ file!?? 
Is there another way to get the comic w/o leaving Itch-io and it not opening in my pictures file? 
Old tiger lost with computer tech! :/ 

AWESOME, I really enjoyed this! Looking forward to next Build. 

Awesome!
Take you're time, waiting excitedly for y'all. 

Yea..... I hope all is well, glad to see ya back! <3

I cannot get to day 2, game keeps crashing :( 

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Uncaught exception occurred. 
While running game code: 

File "game/script.rpy" , line 124, in script

renpy.game.JumpException: chapter_1_day_2

During handling of the above exception, another exception occurred: 

Traceback {most recent call last} : 

File "game/script.rpy", line 124, in script renpy.script.LableNotFound: could not find label  'Chapter_1_day_2' . Did you mean:  'chapter_1_day_1' ? 
*****

I hope this helps, I'd like to play day 2! :)

Won't download? Is this VN deleted? 

BearyJack...... come back! I hope you're OK <3
I'll still wait for updates to your VN Emerald Isle is a really cute VN! 
Your fans are waiting for you. :) 

I think the game is abandoned, I've topped out at just under 20k coins at level 11. I hope to see more from the dev.

THANK-YOU for doing this, I loved the hotel scene!

Leo needs this after the disaster Echo ended with. I hated that end, was so disappointed so I won't spoil anything. 
I hope this will answer questions that I felt were not given in Echo. 
I'm looking forward to the 3d chapter. 

THANK-YOU for giving your story, if whoever reads this...... give Echo a play through. 

Awesome work y'all 5 STARS! 
Really enjoying this, keep up the good work and I'll be waiting for Vol III ;)

Super Awesome concept, beautiful world, well played game dynamics easy to operate and navigate in game. 
As a gay male I don't care for the female sex scenes, not my thing. 
If y'all could add a option to skip those scenes.
OR have a Menu setting when starting/change a game to play as Gay male, Gay Female or Hetro player. 
Thanks for the fun concept and cute game, thought I'd share my idea to help make your game more appealing to the LGBTQIA community too. 

AWWWWWwwwwwww.... he is a GOOD BOY! 
Love this little quick Sim. 

Love this VN it is well written and with beautiful characters that kept me entertained! 
Looking forward when continuation happens.... hopefully soon. 

WOW, I wish y'all the best and look forward to the awesome work ya do! 

Awwwwwww, understandable. But he's so dreamy! And the White Shark wooooooo exciting. 
Glad to see update, will check it out. :) 

AWESOME!
Ya didn't say..... will we get a conclusion on Soul Creek? What happened there at Soul Creek, did it get worse? Will Voidsong bring the conclusion and closure to the chaos of the broken world? 
I'M SO EXCITED! 

OK :)

Me too!!

Awwww, that was a cute short story. <3
Is there anything with Cannon n Tank currently viewable/watchable?

Ah, yeah yes thanks!
Never heard of "Every Date" is this a current VN? I'll give it a try if I can find it. 

Yes, this was great, I couldn't stop as well binged the whole VN in on night..... just that good! Yeah it's 4:07 am going to try to get some sleep. 

5 STARS. YOU MUST READ THIS!
Awesome story, outstanding characters, fantastic plot/story. PURFECT thrills, chills and scares..... this is gonna take you on an emotional roller coaster! I hope you enjoy this VN too and
SPREAD THE WORD ;) 

Whoop, I missed the survey. :/ All of them have potential to be great stories, it's you that decide what we get in the end. I'd love to see Cannon and Tank developed more. 

Keep up the great work, looking forward to your stories and VNs you do, THANKS for all ya do, it is appreciated. <3
Just wondering what ya meant with... EDHIPAC ??  

Too bad, guess that's my end here. :( 
Thanks for your reply, yeah not good at playing games and poor coordination don't help.

Cute story, looking good..... sadly will not continue. 
Cannot skip the first mini game. Ya need a "skip game or finish button". Cannot save game at this point either, quite annoying.
I restarted VN from start 4 times fast forwarding to the point and clicking (N), I'm not a gamer and don't care to play them.  So I won't be continuing this VN. 
Will watch for update to this and may resume VN.