Well done, great story and mysterious character. Ash has so much depth and wanting for answers, that the present and past haunt him. Would love to learn more about him on his journey North wards..... would you consider taking this beginning and continuing into a full length VN? I'd follow "notAsh" on his journey to meet himself and future other sexy guys along the way. Can he "let go" his past or will it come to haunt him more?