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And thank you so much for reading and such insightful thoughts on it!!! It's a real joy to see so many people engaging so whole-heartedly with this. I'm really really happy that you gave so much thought to Hellen's actions, because as much as I loath her, she was a kid like you said. She absolutely had the capability to learn and change. I think she could've been friends with Chrys again. I think about Chrys a lot and I'm glad you felt strongly about her! 

Thanks so much for such a thoughtful comment, I definitely almost did as well and I'm quite glad I didn't. To me, the really horrific part of Steph and Chrys's "relationship" (if you believe her) is how nice it was so I'm glad that resonated!! Thanks so much for reading! Trans women really are the women of women!!!

Thanks so much for reading!!! I think about all of them a lot and sometimes I wonder myself how much of Steph we saw. 

Stephanie: Aw geez, I'm sorry about all this, Hellen. I'll get out of your hair now. 

Just one more thing...

Aaaa I love when something I write can affect someone and make them squirm, yay!!! Also yeah I do think it's funny that I did a Ride Home again, thanks for reading!!! 

Thank you bestie I love women 

I do love how Steph speaks a lot in that scene and I'm glad it came across how I wanted it to!!! Thanks for reading!!!!

Hehehe I'm glad you felt that way, thank you for reading!!!!

This was fun!! I really enjoyed the way that Maria thought almost exclusively in metaphor once she was alone, but when someone else was around was almost forced to confront reality. I've definitely mused while appreciating the night air on a walk so I felt that a lot! Great first showing, I wanna see more!!!

The stage direction was so interesting and novel and I really adored the magic system. I loved the prose so much!! I could easily read much more of this!! Excellent work!!!!

Gorgeous art and gorgeous princess!!! The script was written very well and this is such a fine showing in general!  I can't wait for the full release! 

Insane team, insane premise, insane execution! I cannot believe renpy can do this. I was having a great time and then I was reminded of who wrote this visual novel and spent the last segment in deep emotional pain. Excellent work!!

Everyone must have put so much effort into this, good job! 

I really love how much is said with so precious little. The way that they're so close with such a dense nothing separating them is really gripping, I loved this!

CONGRATS ON YOUR FIRST GAME WOOOOOO the CGs were really nice!!! The sprites were really expressive and sold the script, nice work!!!

Hehe thank youuuuu this really does feel crazy cohesive because of porks' efforts!! Thanks for reading as always!!!!

Yes, she certainly was. Thanks so much for the kinds words!!

Twirling my hair around my finger I like them both a lot. Thank you for reading!!!!

Thanks so much for reading, I'm glad it was gripping!! I haven't really been able to let any of these women go myself!

Yaaaay thank you for reading I'll be rotating Stephanie in my mind forever 

Porks did such an amazing job with the visuals! I only make nice yuri 

I love making wholesome yuri

Thank you for reading I had so much fun playing with formatting on this!!!

Thank you for reading and making my nightmare of someone who actually did creative writing tutoring reading this true, I had to preemptively say she's a math teacher for that reason lol

Yeah I really enjoyed iterating on RIDE HOME a bit!! Thanks for reading!! 

HEHE that's so awesome I'm glad it harrowed you, thanks for playing!

THIS RULED!!!!! My favorite part of the YuGiOh manga was capsule monsters and this scratched an itch I forgot I even had. Hot blooded rivalry culminating in some real toxic yuri shit, this really ruled!!! I can't wait to see more of this project!!! This ruled!!!!!!!

FIRST

A stunning first showing and a stunning showing regardless of whether or not it's a first!!! The aesthetic is so fucking awesome and cohesive, the characters are so blorbo-able, the art is so evocative and unique, the music and general soundscape is killer, the prose is delightful and heartbreaking I WANT MORE ALREADY WAAAAAAH WAAAAAAAH I'M SO BIASED BUT YOU DID SO SO SO GOOD THIS FUCKING WHIPS

This was stunning!!!! Everything, everything from the music to the backdrops to the art and prose and... I don't know, it was perfect. I think it'd be really beautiful to be able to recall how I felt about it all in perfect clarity, but I find myself taken in by the feeling of it all. 

I need Ys more than I need blood in my veins. 

I love the art, this is a nice and succinct little nugget of pain and panic!

I'm struggling to express just what this meant to me without oversharing in the marketplace of ideas, so I'll just say: yeah that's how it is. Masterful work, I had to lean back in my chair and palm my face so many times reading this. I will remember this forever. 

omgggg thank you I'll forget immediately <3

MY GOAT IS BACK WOOOOOOOOO THIS WAS SOOOOO GOOD SHE'S SO REPREHENSIBLE (I need her though) RAAAAAAAH YOU COOKED YOU SERVED 

I know I began writing originally just because I couldn't personally find enough food for myself, but soon it became that same desire to give a voice to something mute. I can't say how honored I am to hear this reminded you of that. Thanks so much for your kind words!!!

Mrs. Stephanie is everyone's favorite teacher though???

I'm genuinely so happy you mentioned a second playthrough!!! I wrote this with the specific intent for it to feel crazy on another playthrough!!!!

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Yay I'm glad you feel that way!

Ira my goat they can't make me hate you

I've been digesting this for a while but just, God. Yeah. It's like that. This is so poignant, excellent work!!!