This was fun!! I really enjoyed the way that Maria thought almost exclusively in metaphor once she was alone, but when someone else was around was almost forced to confront reality. I've definitely mused while appreciating the night air on a walk so I felt that a lot! Great first showing, I wanna see more!!!
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Thank you so much!!! I really loved writing these parts about María. Musing with the cold night air is a vibe and detail in a lot of media that I love so much. Once the Jam judgement period is over I plan to do a revision/expansion of this “episode 1” and then plan out what I would do to continue the story so I guess there’ll be more to see ^^