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Hi Victor, great scene! Your environment is really well done with the mountainous terrain and the use of the trees you created. It really sets the scene for your game.

Well done on the simplicity and continuity of your menus in both scenes. I'm a big fan of the use of white buttons to ensure adequate contrast between elements of the scene.  I would like it if your 'settings' and 'help' buttons were the same size as your 'menu' button, but a minor issue.

Well done on a fantastic prototype. You definitely have some good Unity skills by adding the cloud animation which added to the visual feedback of your prototype.

Well done.

Sam

Great work, Brad! Your game character is excellent. It looks like you had great success using ProBuilder to build your character and assets. Your GUI is very well done and I like how the font you chose matches your scenes really well.

The way you have designed your buttons at the bottom of the game scene are well-designed and this has cut down on unnecessary text. My personal improvement would be to have those buttons aligned and have the reset button above the scale button. But still looks really good how it is.

Your effort to conform to UX principles is evident, Brad. And you have applied best practices to ensure an enjoyable experience with your prototype. Well done!

Hey Brandan. Well done on the creation of a great menu and game scene. You have created some great assets for your prototype and they go great with your theme. Your game character is very cool and you have shown very good ProBuilder skills.

I like the consistency of your menu between scenes and the use of the panel behind the buttons. My only suggestion would be to make the button colours contrast more with the background to increase accessibility for someone who is colourblind.

Overall an excellent prototype, Brendan. I really enjoyed testing out your design.

Sam.

Hi Robert,

Nice work with your storybook. The simplicity of your design makes it easy to view and understand what the content is going to be. 

Using navigation buttons at the bottom of your design make it easy to navigate between pages on a mobile phone, and the bars that change colour are an excellent touch to represent what page you are on.

The use of the Swedish flag and its colours helps make the connection to your Swedish heritage. Using black, sans-serif text on a white background makes viewing simple and is a great way to ensure positive UX. 

I would like a better understanding of how the images will be implemented into your storybook as the consistency of what's already there looks good. I'm assuming that the white dots were navigation buttons that rotated through the images. A trigger for the user would work well here.

Overall, the storybook has a nice user interface and I had a good user experience.

Thanks,

Sam