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Hi Robert,

Nice work with your storybook. The simplicity of your design makes it easy to view and understand what the content is going to be. 

Using navigation buttons at the bottom of your design make it easy to navigate between pages on a mobile phone, and the bars that change colour are an excellent touch to represent what page you are on.

The use of the Swedish flag and its colours helps make the connection to your Swedish heritage. Using black, sans-serif text on a white background makes viewing simple and is a great way to ensure positive UX. 

I would like a better understanding of how the images will be implemented into your storybook as the consistency of what's already there looks good. I'm assuming that the white dots were navigation buttons that rotated through the images. A trigger for the user would work well here.

Overall, the storybook has a nice user interface and I had a good user experience.

Thanks,

Sam