I imagine I'm getting into some WIP areas, but here's what I noticed. Don't take my spam as anything but constructive, I do similar work for a living and I'm kind of passionate about it, especially when it's in a great work in a gender bending theme like this! I know I'm just throwing stuff against the wall and you decide what sticks! Keep up the good work!
I've been unable to find a way to talk to Jane about the stuck cage, though Beth keeps saying I should if I talk to her about it. Maybe I'm missing something. Maybe it's because Jane has moved to the lab.
If you're stuck in the cage and use the lab to get rid of your penis, the cage falls off, you can still talk to Beth about the stuck cage, and she still says to talk to Jane about it. For that matter, if you use the lab to regrow your penis (effectively just escaping the cage by way of a pussy), the cage topic with Beth is still the same, talk to Jane.
Using the physical overrides requires a quantity of formula but doesn't consume any formula.
If you lose your cock after being able to, ahem, "Interact" with Kevin, you discuss it, then you get all shy and say you have to leave, you can't hangout, but you can still "Interact", which is not necessarily a problem, it's just a bit inconsistent. Maybe better would be a different reaction, or an option for what reaction to pick, then an appropriate follow-up like forced leaving if you choose to be shy about it. My 2 cents.
If you don't visit Kevin between when he arranges the date, and the date itself, going back to visit him on a later day he is still talking about the date and the dress code.
I know it's a WIP, but after the date and walk through the park with Kevin, there's a series of dialogs about a notebook in a wall safe that came out of nowhere. I haven't encountered anything about that yet. What led up to it exactly was my first day at Alexcorp was that same day. I completed filing my 3rd stack of papers, in the late afternoon and was automatically whisked off to my date as it completed. Don't know if that helps.
Lactation content! This would definitely have some fun options at the Cafe! "Special milk lattes", adding "cream" when serving a drink (could be a few kinds of "cream" for that matter...), direct from the tap (choose your tap, MC might need to use the break room for some of this, and Erin might want a cut of the "tips")...
Changing into workout clothes at the gym keeps your leg and footwear the same (and there aren't any good girl workout shoes anyway), which can make for some amusing choices in workout clothes! Perhaps having a user-defined workout outfit to change into would be good?
The MC needs money because Beth raised the rent again, so they ask Erin about a raise. Erin might be open to a trial run of a new business model at the coffee shop, she only needs one waitress to try a new uniform and see if customers like the cat cafe idea! With a cute new maid uniform, matching ears, a collar with a little bell (so everyone knows where she is, oops, did it lock? Was there a key in the packaging she threw away last week?), and a tail (that goes where??). Of course, Beth will either happen to stop by the cafe after the MC has been doing it for several days at least, or she'll see the collar on the MC (if it was locked on), or find something when delivering something to the MC's room (definitely not snooping!), and I'm sure she'd LOVE to have a cute kitty maid cleaning the home! The MC will tell Kevin about it, of course, and end up doing the same there for a little more money! Something tells me Eve would enjoy being cute catgirls together, and who knows where that would lead! Definitely lots of headpats with mental reinforcement!
This is still a favorite game of mine, and I love that you're actively improving it! Just thought you could use some more on your to do list! =^._.^=
Many of the renderings have painted nails, which look great, but (with a lot of work) it would be a good area for feminization to have someone recommend it or require it, or just explore it yourself with the makeup kit (you could get a week or two out of a good attempt), or the salon (the salon, of course would have mani pedi options for more permanent color and different styles). Personally, I'd consider it a low priority feature to fill things out when you're running out of things to do.
When talking with Beth, at least, maybe with others, she goes on about multiple outfits, even if it's not the first time you've talked to her after buying them, like, (paraphrasing here) "I like that outfit! Oh, that outfit's good! That outfit looks great on you!"
Oh! Or instead of those reactions from Jane, since he swapped it out, HE now has the only working key! So Jane can't really help, and he could either keep it secret as you slowly finish transforming, or you have to figure out who has your key, or learn to pick the lock, or he could reveal it and there could be a whole keyholder relationship! (yay! more work! lol)
When fooling around with Eve, while she's still locked, you can give her a blowjob with no cage in sight. Also in that scene, the MC's mouth is kind of scary looking!
While I haven't progressed far enough in this run through to see if something like this happens, I wanted to share an idea. Maybe the MC tells Kevin about the cage at some point, like if he's wondering how complete the transformation is, you know, out of concern and totally not because he wants to know what he's dealing with down there in his fantasies! So you tell him about it and how it keeps the transformation from completing down there, maybe even show him if you're depraved enough, and some time on a different day, there's an incident that makes you take it off. Like, I don't know, you watch porn together, or your arousal is just too high, while hanging out and he notices how uncomfortable you are, so he suggests you take it off, and if you do, and go to the bathroom (because he keeps you well hydrated) without putting it back on, he'll switch it with an identical cage, but it doesn't have Jane's magic formula in it so it won't offer any protection against shrinkage! But you won't know, you'll keep wearing it to protect yourself, but it won't work! Of course when you inevitably start shrinking, you'd have to be able to talk to Jane about it, and she should just be too busy to help, or brush you off, or tell you to *relax*, and you're doomed to shrink away!
When I encountered the bus girl who offered a blowjob, while I was caged, she asked if I had the key and I just handed it to her like it was nothing, I totally expected her to lock me up after and charge more to get it back!
Getting covered with goo when a cboy makes your naked graphics futa.
After getting frilly sissy diaper through any means, your clothes disappear. So if you get the diaper by your boss in the bathroom, with the threat to not wear diapers, you also don't have clothes.
After a sissy becomes a girl, she continues to have thoughts about her size.
Many interactions with a penis despite not having one, such as the tube in a changing station.
Plenty of closet issues. Empty diaper section, can't change cat ears, body graphics changed back to male, but clothes show it correctly as female, getting stuck in the closet after selecting a diaper (when they actually show up), click the diaper window after that and you get a lot of repeated:
ERROR DETECTED!
Tell xey error code: TypeError: response is not a function backbutton!
Forest gets broken, idk why, I now have no character icon, no wolf icon, and the locations of things all changed.
Still, I love the game, and I am familiar with dev and debug so I appreciate the effort that goes into it! Overall it is quite stable!
Someone's been watching Mushoku Tensei: Jobless Reincarnation... of course being reborn as a girl was something they totally dropped the ball on in that show!
Thanks! Very nice of you, and it would certainly be a good example to learn from for those of us that learn best by examples. Actually following through and making something is a different story for me!
Oh, this is Twine? I've never opened one up before, but the others I've known are Twine are just text. I saw the name SugarCube in the code, didn't know that was a Twine setup. Thanks!
Grr... I had to check the guide to get the last ending! Got them all, now! (15 is still my favorite!)
BTW, the guide has a typo, the reward for Ending 16 is wrong
Anyway, great job! How'd you decide on this game engine? I've never heard of it before this game, but it looks interesting, and maybe pretty accessible to beginner coders?
Ok, here's a bug that's probably a little obscure. Minor spoilers, possibly, but I'll try. If you're completely self taught, then you ask for teaching, the "Accept Carefully" link is orange and if you click it, you get an error: Error: the passage "MagicPractice""" does not exist
I know it's still in development, but the fans site keeps saying the next step is to upload your pics. In case it matters, I clicked No to upload my pics (and loved the result, btw!), but the process should be done, now.
After having been applying makeup for a while, then finally becoming completely female, the MC has no idea what she's doing, and the error appears: Failed to load: img/pictures/bad_makeup_nd.png, which also makes the game stuck, basically.
Maybe someone, maybe Jane, has some "music" that will help you relax at night. Maybe it will help you get more comfortable with your body, maybe it will have side effects related to chores and obedience, who knows? I'm sure it won't have any side effects in other storylines, either, like at work...
Personally, and I know we all may have different thoughts on this, but personally, I think the handjob is unlocked far too easily. Like, just head down to the park and try it as soon as it's suggested? Seems a little out of character to me, even with the deviation level I'm inevitably at just by playing along. I would suggest the action (in all the places it can be done) should be unlocked by certain interactions, like with Eve (somehow), or Kevin, or Beth and Jane during chores (With a strap on, a friends, or... ooh! Maybe with Eve?), maybe requiring high arousal to even attempt it. Same with blowjobs, I like the training requirement, but it still seems too easily accepted, in my opinion.
