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You could add a detail about him looking human after his name, or maybe add a separate section where you describe the LI after the summary?

I enjoyed reading this and think it has a lot of potential. One suggestion though, the summary led me to expect an alien, but the aliens don't come off as alien much at all. You might want to add something to manage people's expectations so they don't wind up disappointed, hoping to romance the equivalent of the Predator- though that might just be me, lol. Good luck with your story!

I chose the 'tie it up and put on a hat' hair option and got a bunch of errors:

Error: cannot execute macro <<cycle>>: unable to parse macro argument ""$hairstyle autoselect": unterminated double quoted string

Error: child tag <<option>> was found outside of a call to its parent macros <<cycle>>, <<listbox>>

Error: child tag <<option>> was found outside of a call to its parent macros <<cycle>>, <<listbox>>

Error: child tag <<option>> was found outside of a call to its parent macros <<cycle>>, <<listbox>>

Error: child tag <<option>> was found outside of a call to its parent macros <<cycle>>, <<listbox>>

Error: child tag <<option>> was found outside of a call to its parent macros <<cycle>>, <<listbox>>

Error: child tag <<option>> was found outside of a call to its parent macros <<cycle>>, <<listbox>>

Error: child tag <</cycle>> was found outside of a call to its parent macro <<cycle>>

This was so much fun to play and replay.  I loved all the characters, Martin is so sweet and excited to show off their cool vampire tricks! <3  Angela is the classic vamp, out for #1, lol.  Laurent was my fave though.  I would love to read more if you add to this, or write more in this world.

An interesting premise, I'm curious to see more of.  The art is colorful and interesting.  Needs spellchecked, but other than that it's definitely worth playing. I had difficulty downloading though. Through the itchio app, in the install bar, nothing showed up to install. I had to manually download using my web browser (Firefox) and unzip to play.

Ryona's casual outfit is so flippin' gorgeous, SHE'S so flipping gorgeous, and amazing, thank you, thank you, thank you!! <3

This was a lot of fun to read, although the saves didn't work.

Very sweet.  Thank you so much. <3

That demo ending was perfect- I was surprised and devastated it was over.  XD  Fantastic writing and art.  I can't wait to see the rest of this, so I guess I'll be  creating a Kickstarter account.  Best of luck to you all.

I'm on Windows

I enjoyed the demo, but the links on the last page aren't working. :(