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Its PaperCreaseArt. I don't really use it, do I need to do anything my end? 

I am not a writer at all but I gave it another try and want to write down what jump out as odd to me. The obvious thing is the pov change. It actually not very impactful. The biggest thing I think is that many part became cold descriptive compared to the old one. 
For example in the very first page/ scene, where MC check his bloody wound. In the new one, you just described the wound, "A wound like that should have still been open. It wasn't." Very matter of fact, like you get a scan report read out. While in the old one, "You press in hard. The skin holds, firm under pressure that should be reopening it." There is a action by the character, reaction from it and the contradiction of the character expectation. Same information but it feels a bit more lively than the new one, imo. There are other places where it got rewrite to be dry and cold as well. 
And then there are the very obvious AI-ness in the new writing. The amount of em-dashes and the "Not A, not B, just C" are very very distracting. If you were using AI before, your new AI's writing is shit. If you weren't using AI before, your writing is good enough you have no reason to use AI at all tbh.

Did you throw the thing at an ai? Why? Imo, 0.2.x read way better sadly.

Please make king Barrett a RO just for sht and giggles. And he seems like the only normal human being anyway. I don't see how anyone else will help MC heal. 

Or let me join the undead when they come. My MC is almost there emotionally, might as well go all the way. Romance is for the weak. 

yeah I am thinking something like doing x ray scan, feeling bleeding point with the heat senses to do first aid instead of the magic spell kind. or just be a human size warming bag :)

I have kind of sensitive touch irc, surprised this is a thing in game! I kind of want more customization tho. Touching people give stupid amount of information compare to just objects. I like feeling texture but skin and muscle, things that move is kind of too much. Good for a healer MC if MC can be a healer? martial arts and healing seems fitting

And Tellus!! no!!! buddy was so close to confess. Let us speak to him too please!