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The art for this game has something extremely Eerie at times. The character of “me”, at the start, has an especially good piece. And the writing also is strong!

This was beautiful

Honestly, this wasn’t even bad. It was straight up funny!

That was so bad I actually kinda loved it 😂

There’s something very haunting and yet calming about this game! I can definitely see the Spirited Away vibes.

This was fantastic. The tightness and clever mechanics lead to something way beyond what it should be able to reach. Absolutely fantastic!

The style was super interesting, and I think the music was very eerie! Overall very good play.

This was a delight to play! Sad, romantic, and sometimes even funny.

This is beautiful. I love the odd mechanics of changing words and structure! It’s a lovely piece.

Dark but clever and fun! I enjoyed this!

Honestly, my favourite of the jam so far. Super enjoyable, great writing and cool concept!

One small typo: “cigarette at the end]of each day.”

This was a lovely story! I enjoyed the eerie setting, and the voice actors were enjoyable. Also glad you didn’t have to wait for them to finish speaking before continuing. If I have one small thing, and this might just be an issue for me, it’s that I would have liked to choose between a few font sizes. It appeared just a little big to easily read.

The UI was sincerely lovely and easy to use. So simple and yet, I just loved it. Felt good to play.

What the heck, this game is so cool! The styling is fantastic and the idea is eerie especially with the music. I love this so much.

This game was super fun!! I enjoyed finding different ways to get to everyone greatly.

This was beautiful. I’m so sorry to hear of your loss.

That was really interesting to play!!

With which bit ?

Damn, that was really good.

Wow. That was amazing.

Nice game! Some of the puzzles were fairly confusing, like wondering what would happen if I clicked “no, just go back”. Also the “Replay” button at the end just disappears…

(spoilers)

??? That was a crazy ending. Why does it just say "BAD ENDING"?

I love the animation so much!!! The art is lovely (especially that transition with the scary-to-nice :) ) and I would play it again if I had more time!

(SPOILER) If you click 'Born', then return, wait for 'unfolding', go through that, then click 'Born' again, you get a new, unclicked option.

Hmm, where did you get stuck? There is a fair amount of timed text I plan to go back and remove. Maybe you need to wait? Sorry about that.

Wow. I am amazed. This is so amazing. Writing top notch, and it gives me the shivers to think about it. And yet it is beautiful. Damn.

I got 16 days on first try... I'm pretty proud of that!

Nice writing! I want to play the full game now...

Your writing is so perfect. It flows beautifully. I can't believe that was under 500 words.

Hmm, let me try!

Uhhh... Hmmmm.. I'm not sure what to say about this one. It's pretty cool. But, uh, what??

Really cool TBH. Just don't understand what to do after the "Helena" text.

Super cool and clever! I'm still super confused at what actually happened....

Very good, puzzles slide nicely into the setting.