Your song was incredibly chill! Sad when the song ended, felt like it fell short. Feel like it could easily been a 3-4 min. song. I really enjoyed this. Keep making beautiful music.
Thank you for the honest feedback. Always looking to improve! Will work on that on my future pieces. Also thanks for the compliment on my art piece. Its actually a pretty big painting I did hanging up my wall.
Longing felt very choppy to me. Then when I listened to A Moment to Breathe it was a lot more fluid and flowy! I liked the piano in Longing, I just would've made it more fluid like your other song. Nonetheless, you did great work!
That beat was amazing!!! I love how it creeped in. In a matter of fact, I loved how everything creeps in on you. It's like you weren't expecting these turns, but it all works really well. Nicely done.
First off!The bass was astounding!!! It's like you couldn't get enough bass. I loved it. Second, I really like the "on air" versions. They really come to life and tie your songs together. As someone else mentioned, the sax song did feel out of place. I felt like it didn't fit in with the other four. However, it was still a great song! I really enjoyed listening to your music! Great work!!!
For being an incomplete project, this is really good. Glad you decided to upload and share. I like the use of different instruments and how they play with each other. Felt like you really captured the theme.
