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It's a chapter undergoing modifications. It's not really meant too have jokes, Octavius is extremely petty. Abnormally so, I can focus on making him a bit darker if that's what everyone wants. 

This is the second comment I got in one day about it the exact same thing. so this situation actually has me super frustrated that it's upsetting a bunch of people all at the same time. It's a bit difficult to deal with. I don't have a team of people to consult with since I'm just one person doing everything. So I'll need to reconsidure my position on the game.

Thanks for bringing it to my attention

I'll definitely check those games out ;)

I put the tags there for that reason, also that this is fictional, I was also a victim myself at one point when a date put their hands on me a decade ago. It wasn't easy, but I had to deal with things in a my own way, I do not recommend it to a rape victim AT ALL, this game does not represent what happens in reality it's pure fiction.

The game is a mix of rape/dubious consent where it becomes a twisted love in some way. It's meant to cater to the act of forced love as a fetish, and not to represent the extreme act of rape as a whole. These guys would all be in jail if they were real people. 

Real rape I do not condone, it's horrible, and wrong.

I wouldn't recommend the game to anyone who forced into those situations in real life. The approach is meant to be different in the sense, for those interested in yanderes, obsessive love. 

They paid the 5$ I got in touch with them.

send me a message Soupinsoup@gmail.com

Someone paid for my game but is unable to download it. Does anyone know what might be causing this?? Someone sent me the message and I have no idea how to help them! that this is an issue happening since last night. I read somewhere it might be disabled the download but according to my settings its not.

Thats really weird. I'm going to test this right now! um did you go for the windows version?

Yay Thanks for letting me know!!! also glad you like it ;)

I know how you feel, thats partly why I want everyone to enjoy the full game for free! <3

Set it up in a way where not a huge amount of the story will be affected by the paid version, its more so bonus stories. 

paid version: his pov in the chapter menus

Patreon: has the paid version and early versions of Harlan Tatterly, Warren chapter 2, and Octavius chapter 2. Not complete chapters but complete scenes.

I'm so glad you like it <3

how can I prevent this?

I set up the file name to be different along with the build information. 

gamenamefull gets overwritten by gamenamepaid

Oh good! I'm uploading this version as a new file though since there's a diff

Is there a way I can give them access to the paid version of the game? So theres no need to buy it for them. 

Gotta put the Alice in Wonderland symbolism <3

Paid versions will have pov chapters <3 that fill in a few things. 

There's no art for him yet though. And the next update is a revamped scene with him

Jabberwocky is in the game already, he is the secret character in Octavius route ;)

Not yet! Only one line which I'll send to you.

I hope you enjoy it <3

Tall. I think leaning on 5,9 for the twins. Maybe actually 6,1 for Lorian. Tall but not too tall.

And yeah one update, Milo in Noxs route has a shimmering spade ;) 

Delmar is the gentle manipulator. He's soft spoken, and warm. He seems to be empathetic too. However he's duo faced. He's got a darker side to him. So on the surface he's rather kind, but he's very calculated. He tries to coax you into trusting him, to enforce sort of obedience?

His traits..

Coaxing/comforting is his manipulation weapon. He uses that to guide you where he wants you.

He does so by lowering your guard, aiming to make submission come more naturally, getting you to do it on your own.

He acts empathetic towards you, using touch, comfort, and given he wants you, he takes on a more loving role in manipulation too.

He focuses on calming the situation, nerves through a tight hug gentle kisses. Acting as if he's a lover. His grip is extremely tight making it very hard to even push or pull away. 

He makes escaping him hard.

Height as in how tall? I think between 5,9 and 6,1 ;) specific but not super tall ;) Lorian would be 6,3.

As for personality... Dreagan is kind of a silent figure often counts on Delmar to manipulate if he knows the person won't be responsive, while Delmar manipulates with comfort and touch. 

went through my notes and refined the summary. I'll send you delmars in a moment

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Dreagan is:

Cold, and calculating, he's not cruel, and not as manipulative like Delmar. But he follows the rules, and won't tolerate deviation. He's sort of the enforcer to get results, if Delmar struggles to get anything.

He's also a bit more solider-like. You'd feel kind of stressed out to reason with him. Heavy presence?

His traits ...

He's authoritive, he has a very commanding presence even when not talking, he carries out orders no matter what they are.

He doesn't negotiate, he follows the rules

He's detached where, he's not affected by pleas/outbursts.

He's also pretty observant, when Delmar manipulates he'll tend to wait for the best moment to step in.

He's somewhat loyal or was loyal to Lorian. Up until the idea of actually leaving joker has arrived. 

Although he likes the joker kingdom. he and Delmar want to experience life outside joker. And possibly go as unaffiliated or to spades(everyone sees spades as the safe haven. Given the ruler is the dormouse, Milo, he's considured to be pretty forgiving, and doesn't mind taking in others)

Absolutely <3 actually I'm going to be writing some bios on them ;) I want to make a bit more advanced biographys, especially in the next day or so! Please do link the fanfic if you write it. It's a ton of fun to see what type of story you make with them!<3<3<3 

Yeah, they are the secret route ;)

I'll go through them. I have a patch planned to fix a missing scene too ;) 

exactly ;)

Thanks for catching that whoopsie!!! I updated it right before bed last night 🤣 

;) taking a break from adding the next route to add a chapter 2 or maybe multiple chapters? I actually have 1/3 of octavius chapter 2 ready as of yesterday lmao! With no real art needed to be done in the second chapters aside from CGs, though I may add more poses ;), wow things will be finished fast. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! The twins were also a route too, incase you missed them. ;) all in all there are currently 4 perusable characters and the twins (3p route) from the 5 chapter ones. ;) and yes, wonderland is a really chaotic place. I figured it would be more fun to make the world in a more modern setting as an almost mirror world that changes as time goes on.

Hope you enjoy, as of right now there's 5 routes ;)

I have it up, I just have not released it yet since I dont have the patreon version ready ;)

I always look forward to your input!!! <3 makes me smile reading this. I actually chose the Wonderland theme BECAUSE the characters can easily fit with a kink. Even an uncommon one.

Plus wonderland is full of crazy characters. Adding lorian was my own original character. I figured having a prison route would be a lot of fun. 

I do intend to actually update models in the future too so it's not just their expressions that are moving but their arms are also doing things and maybe even their ears ;)

Currently I'm working on adding the chapters section to the game. To make it easier to read each section you would like. There are a lot of chapters lol. I'm glad you like the length too. Sometimes Im like... Is this too long?? But I always remind myself this is exactly the length I would want to read ;) 

I also tell myself a lot of things like that when I make decisions. Fun debating whether I should have asked something because it's going to take a long time to do I tell myself if I was the reader would I be disappointed? Which lead me to write the additional warren smut scene rather than put a bit of a revamp ;)

Get in touch with me <3

soupinsoup@gmail.com

Each of them develop an odd attachment that becomes a bit more obsessive as time goes on ;) getting progressively more obsessed by the chapter.

Nox/milo dynamic is essentially the cat/mouse friendship. Milo is the dormouse ;) while yeah cats lose interest. Nox starts to change a lot in the future route. His route has a lot of objectification, and some body modification elements going forward. Mil is also a secret character. And will be a part of the slight revamp going forward.

Delmar and Dreagan ;) the good/bad cop manipulators lol. First time writing a scene like that heehee. 

Lorians also got a pretty hard side to him. He has a control dynamic, he's obsessed with creating bets to completely monopolize you (games are a part of his rule)

Yeah Warrens the protective yandere ;)

Octavius is a VERY different character in the game (He NEEDS you, and is completely obsessed with you straight from the beginning. He wants you to be 100% reliant on him, making him very authoritative. Its also part of enforcing his rule.)

Cealus is a big character too <3 (I'm not spoiling much on him though ;) )

jabberwocky tough to find but here:

option 1 ............

option 2 dont consent

option 3 refuse

option 4 dont consent ;)

testing one more build, this might fix it!

I'm putting up the build, hopefully it works!

;) I have noticed the skirt thing lol. I do perfer pants. I do actually want to make it an option in the future too ;) whether you wear a skirt or pants. I will also put out an option for prefered words in smut scenes. Like panties/underwear/thong, etc ;) along with other key prefered words for the reader when reading smut ;)

I'm waiting for its approval!

Thankyou !! fixng it <3 you can hit ignore and bypass it <3

Ah, I shall fix this immediately!

The 2 r18 scenes are dependent on the kidnap route and the normal route (cavity search that takes place ). Whether you check the bed or not.

The smut scenes are with Lorian and the other is the twins route.