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You seem to misunderstand my response--I wasn't explaining those details in a defense, I was simply elaborating why they're not at a certain level in the game as it is now. You asked some genuinely good questions that definitely reminded me of things I'd like to keep in mind for the next update, it's just I didn't want to simply say "oh yes, I have things planned for this aspect, don't worry!" and leave it at that.

Though I will admit, looking at a work, especially an early and in-progress work, and providing critique without aspects like time and personnel in consideration, it can come off a little... insensitive? That's not the exact word I'd use, but it gives the same general vibe. Lots of early and in-progress games can only go so far when only one person is actively working on them, and to hold them to standards of games with actual teams backing them can be a bit unfair.

I'm proud of what I was able to put out for the alpha demo, but I am very much aware if I had allowed myself more time to provide extra polish, it could be better. Even right after I posted it, thoughts popped into my head of "oh, but I could have done this" or "i had the time, why didn't i add XYZ??" 

But this is also my first ever game, so that's another aspect to be taken into account in development critique! I completely agree that once something is publicly posted, it shouldn't be immune to critique and feedback just because of the small team and it's my first thing, but there's definitely nuance and context to be had when critiquing in general. I don't think any of your comments were out of line, though, let me restate. I'd definitely prefer you over somebody screaming that it's terrible and insisting I do better without the context of the game's creation in mind.

That being said, however, I do have a team now, so with any luck, production will go much smoother and we'll be able to provide a stronger proof of concept in the next update!

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Some bits about what you have asked were touched on in some of the devlogs, though admittedly not in great detail.

Right now, the primary plan is branching narrative, with some things shifting based on choices and interactions with others, but likely not to the extent that there are 500 million different paths you can take. 

As for your second question, it's important to remember that this is still the alpha 1.0 demo, that I made mostly by myself. I mainly did it with my storytelling and characterization feet forward, as I consider those my strongest skills, so I didn't quite cover all that Ren'Py can do with it, especially with a self-imposed due date.

However, it's definitely going to be kept in mind for the next update, which will start to bring more of that into light. Plans are being made for choices to have some effect, and attempt to make use of more of Ren'Py's tools to keep things from getting too stale. 

I just didn't get much chance to showcase stuff like that because I was rushing a bit, and also there weren't any real places to put things like that where they'd be majorly significant/noticeable.

Some slip-ups like certain things being known before you speak to certain jesters will also probably be gone back over and fixed, that was more an error in writing on my part, since again, it was all mainly on one person at the time ^^;;

https://snowish.itch.io/court-of-fools

Howdy-ho! Pleased to announce that after a few months of work, the alpha demo for my visual novel game, Court of Fools, is now ready!

Court of Fools is a character-driven death game that takes place in a worldbuilding-focused fantasy world. You play as Greg, a simply guy who's just acquired a promising job as a jester... Only to find out you have several jester co-workers...

... and to top it all off, the king dies!

As of right now, the demo focuses on establishing the characters and giving you small glimpses into the greater threads of what this world will contain, and stands at roughly 2-2.5 hours of content.




The game is very much in its infancy, but I have pretty big plans for it that I will cover in a devlog after a few days of it being up! 

I hope you enjoy!!