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It didn't feel like an inspiration that came to you but like something you came up with to finish the composition. Of course that is only my opinion and I don't know if that's true or not, but art is always subjective and in the end we tend to like stuff that doesn't feel constructed. It wasn't bad, but it didn't have the freshness of ideas as the first part.

Remarkable in scope and execution. The dynamics and tempo changes are beautiful. I think it would benefit from polishing in FL studio because it sounds a bit mechanical in some parts and the reverb isn't too convincing. 

beautiful soundscapes

I like the composition, the musical ideas and the overall flow and arrangement of the piece. The intoduction of the violin refreshened the theme and was beautiful crafted. The piano gets a bit muddy in the lower registers with those tight voicings. That one wooden percussion sound is a bit harsh and it always falling strictly on the 1 of a beat where all the other instruments already hit creates a mechanical and prosaic vibe that contradicts the flowing nature of the composition.

The build-up is too long and lacks direction. The chromatic note in the bass going up from first to second degree feels off and the lead synth with the heavy vibrato feels weirdly satirical. I like the parts with the beat going on, though.

The feeling of being immersed in the sea is conveyed really great and I liked the way it shifted seemlessly into the music. The rhythms are crafted very well. Overall an entertaining entry.

I really like the sound selection and the mix. The arrangement is a bit too repetitive and lacks a counterbalance for the quirky and clashing harmonies.

Comfy and well crafted arrangement. 

I was a bit afraid that those quirky harmonies would go over your head, but you managed them competently. Solid composition and beautiful orchestration.

Sounds good and develops it's core idea nicely. I found the pitch shift in the end a bit gimmicky.

Although the execution can't keep up with it, this is a remarkable composition regarding scope and structure. Unfortunately it lacks direction and an adequate audio production and is too long, while not introducing any new ideas.

I liked the vibe in the first one and a half minutes. The harmonies and instruments work together and the leads sound has a far eastern touch to it with its ringing fourths and occassional blue notes. The song seemed to lack direction after that and didn't really develop anything or introduce new ideas.

I like the sound selection and the harmonies. But the drums get completely drowned (no pun intended) and the second part misses its impact. 

Sounds good and I like the focus on one idea for this minimal music track, but expanding it with a contrasting section of some sorts would have made it feel more complete. 

I like the harmonies and the sound selection. Drums seem to lack a bit of motivation.

This is comfy vgm in the best sense of the word. The reverb on the strings sounds a bit off.

Reminded me of C418's "beton", but took a different path in the further development. I think the focus on only a few sounds worked well in this particular case. 

The melodic development and the entangling of the instruments was engaging and satisfying. 

I liked the second half better. That main synth is a bit harsh to my ears.

Nice one. Real instruments and VSTis blend well together. Great counterpoint. The B-Section felt a bit forced to me.

This is probably the best mastered track of all submissions

Tight and interesting

that sounds really good, listened a bunch of times

I unlocked that feature by activating developer tools in preferences (ChatGPT told me that trick). I think I managed to send u a friend request.

https://discord.com/users/580153069036109832

Hey, sounds interesting. Can we talk about it on discord?

Hey, I really like your artstyle and the gameplay of your games! I made music for the Jingle Box Jam-entry in the Tiny Game Jam (Dezember 2025) and I'm looking for new Projects. If you're interested: simon_bluethner[at]hotmail.com

Hey, my name is Simon and I'm a composer and sounddesigner. I tried a few times to get into game jams, but the whole thing was always a bit confusing and intimidating to me. I have a lot of creative output, though, and I'd really like to contribute in some projects. Here are a few pieces I did lately: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1AI5WBtvUpKkulwUA7cz8bAxda4XR-lEb?usp=drive_link

Hey, 

I'm an aspiring composer and producer and I'm looking for projects to gather experience in creating music for video games. I uploaded a few things I have worked on recently. Reach out if you're interested in a collab: simon_bluethner@hotmail.com

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1AI5WBtvUpKkulwUA7cz8bAxda4XR-lEb?usp=dri...

Hey, 

I'm an aspiring composer and producer and I'm looking for projects to gather experience in creating music for video games.
I uploaded a few things I have worked on recently.
Reach out if you're interested in a collab: simon_bluethner@hotmail.com

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1AI5WBtvUpKkulwUA7cz8bAxda4XR-lEb?usp=dri...