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Pros:

• Class feels unique and has a lot of potential for fun characters
• Special brews are slick Cons:
• More special brews! Beer has water, malted barley and hops. You could have a crafting table? That’s before adjuncts -> my brain goes towards some fusion of alchemy and brewing
• I want more! Maybe a notable npc and what they do (this is me wanting lore)

Good job! (:

Pros:

• I really like the setting. Seems fun and easy to incorporate anywhere
• Random tables are always fun - encounters, rumors, hooks. Good stuff
• Grub -> Nymph -> Cicada is slick

Cons:

• I’d like to see a map! Or a description of where things are in relation to one another
• Maybe detail the blood nymphs a bit more in relation to how terrible it is for surface dwellers? Or maybe a hook where the local city-state has made a deal for blood nymphs to be transported to an enemy? Sounds like a fun plot hook

All in all it’s fun and I like it! Good job :)

homebrewery.naturalcrit.com

It’s a great tool :)

Thank you so much!

I used Homebrewery for creating the PDF. It outputs that 5e-sorta vibe. This was my first time using it - I have zero illustration/design/digital art skills so it was amazing for getting some work done.

Completely agree on the aesthetic not being in line with Shadowdark - I’ll see how I can improve in the future!