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Thank you for taking to the time to comment also and not be mad or upset. :) I really appreciate that you are open minded.  

It was difficult to find what to do next in Shift 3 I just felt like I was wandering aimlessly without any direction.  

It's your baby so of course do what makes you happy and how you want it to be, it's your creation, :) but I hope you keep an open mind that with yandere games you don't want too slow of a burn.  I have played many and most fail because there is not enough of yandere elements and too much bantering back and forth that is just filler and may not be interesting or based around the psychotic obsessive elements that these types of games want to subject the reader.  Most people watching youtube videos or playing visual narrative games if bored within a few minutes usually drop it.

But like I said your game is one of the better ones and I thoroughly enjoyed shift 1 and 2.  It's got a lot of unique elements and new ideas which is awesome and the story is really interesting.

As for commenting on the AI part I apologize, I felt like there were certain parts that sounded AI because they just kept on rambling and repeating certain subjects which AI tends to do it also forgets often what it just said and I found that in certain aspects of the writing.  

It also said in Shift 2 I believe when he was driving her home that he couldn't read or write if you go back, you can see that part when he asks for her number.

But please take this as a grain of salt you are doing a great job, and I am grateful for artists like you creating fantastic stories and games for us to enjoy it takes a lot of work I know for a fact being a writer and digital artist in my past.

Also, my background story that I made was not based on anime or being sarcastic many movies and stories have that kind of background not just anime you can see that kind of story in Korean movies or spy movies from Hollywood.  Even like a military operative or marine where they do go through like torturous experiences to get tougher and shape their mind to be stronger than any civilian.

In conclusion I can't wait to play the continuing saga of your game, and I think you have a real talent to make games that I would be happy to pay for, and I mean that.  :)

Maybe Spoiler Alerts: 

I am back after playing shift 1 and 2 which I found really enjoyable and interesting and posted as a video.  But as I started to play Shift 3 I realized that there was something really lacking that same spark of creativity and danger that I was just getting excited for while playing Shift 1 and 2.  

I really hope the developer reads these comments because I am sorry but I really felt like Shift 3 was written by AI it lacked a certain human quality to it and left me feeling like I was just wondering around for hours just clicking on the same things over and over again which was extremely boring, lackluster and didn't hold anything exciting.  There was no action which was disappointing except for the end but even that had nothing to do with Biker Boy and his supposedly yandere and crazy elements.

Spoilers:  Stop here if you don't want to know more about the game. I played Biker Boy Path 1 but I have no idea what Path 2 meant, and it would help if the developer explained that part in the game.

Yes, it answered some questions about biker boy and why he is like this, but it still left me feeling empty inside and had way too many mistakes and contradictions.  For one thing Biker Boy is supposed to be illiterate, yet he could in shift 3 write his name and text.  He also spoke like a strange and very monotonous textbook using big grammar words which is impossible without schooling.  It also didn't make sense that he was in the Army as they would never let someone in that couldn't read and write.  It would have been better if he was kidnapped as a child by some evil people, put in a basement and tortured and trained till he was a killing machine like an assassin that only knows how to kill and obey which would explain the mad dog aspect but he has triggers like he doesn't know how to talk to people or have relationships because of extreme isolation and is hiding his face because he was left in the dark so much that it's comforting to him and maybe his face because he was beaten till he had no identity left.  He had no schooling of course just the schooling of killing and obeying his handlers.  But he escaped and has been on the run ever since and now afraid to show his face in case they hunt him down.  That fabrication would have better explained his mannerisms and PTSD including the reason why he was built like a brick wall.

The MC is way too stupid also and seems to be just bullying Biker Boy which is not fair including they are too clingy and needy which made me not like the MC including their stupid phrases after a npc explained something MC would answer with "What" like they had no idea what was just explained to them even two times, a real dunce.  And whom spends hours at a stranger's workplace which is a dangerous place a garage including being allowed to just wonder around when they are not welcome to begin with.  It toke me forever to move the story forward just by clicking on each dark figure and things that were not relevant to the game, and the conversations became tedious without any action.  It just felt too unrealistic and the conversations were just too fake as strangers would not tell another stranger about their co-workers past who they work with for 2 years it just seemed too bizarre.

In conclusion I really hope that the developer looks at this and maybe moves forward with Shift 4 being more interesting and exciting give us some real Yandere Biker boy traits and craziness as you promoted it to be don't tell people that this is slow burn nobody likes slow burns in entertainment if they want to gain an audience at least in my opinion.  To keep them interested you need to give it passion, blood and crazy to keep them intrigued in the yandere world. Just saying.  

I am not saying any of this to insult but please take this as constructive criticism only here as a writer myself I am also my worse critic.  In hindsight I really enjoy your game except for the torturous monotony of Shift 3 and dim-witted MC.  And I am looking forward to following your game to see how it develops hopefully with more drama and action.

Part 1 of 3 the trilogy of my descent into this madness is so very thrilling.  I am loving this game it's so fun, the writing is wonderful and really touches on the way everyone has issues and can't always be masked unless you're Biker Boy.  I am definitely following for more shifts and can't wait to finish this game so please finish it so my craving for Mad Dogs end.  This is Part 1 of my playthough hope you enjoy! 

I enjoyed the voice acting and also creepy Clyde but there were some areas that were too descriptive and made me feel kind of bored reading about especially the library.  I do hope you finish this game as I am looking forward to how crazy Clyde can get!  

I love Noodles especially late night noodles game is very interesting but could use a little more development to find things easier in the game.

Thank you. <3

I just woke up put on my pink heart shaped glasses and went down a rabbit's hole of cuteness overload!  I am still reeling from the aftereffects of whatever kind of drug this is but I want more of Virgil and of course where that fabulous boy toy buys his clothing!  

Whatever you wrote that was legendary I had to put on my rose-tinted glasses to actually try and understand it. :D

That was an epic response! I nearly spat out my grape juice right my grape juice laughing so hard.

I am so glad that I had made your evening!  I hope your days become brighter!  :)

You have a great start in your journey in creating and writing games.  I really liked the story but would have really enjoyed our main characters how they met instead of already together and would have liked to know how the stone monster came to be and how they fell in love.  :)

Also, there were some parts that seemed to drag on and could have been more to the point.  But otherwise, you have a great imagination and are really talented I wish you much success in your endeavors in life and hope to see more from your creativity.  Here is my playthrough as you can see, I love to laugh and have fun in my playthroughs.  I can't wait to play part 2!  

Thank you I haven't been playing games for 2 months on here so will try it out when I have a moment good job in getting it to work <3

The worse horror ever to happen to me is when I cannot even eat my  egg fried rice.  Why did you have to put a tree on the sidewalk where I was driving? lol  I got  stuck. :P

This thread is hilarious! :D

You are all so cute! lol I had a laugh reading the comments! :D

I wanted to let you know your game seems to have something copyrighted in it?

You can go into the preferences and click english.

Who knew doing laundry could be so scary? I really liked your game it gave me such a freight!  I loved how you made scary looking things seem not too scary such as the strawberry jam part that made me laugh! :) I can't wait to play more of your games.

Thank you please be mindful I am autistic so I hope I don't offend with my playthrough. :)

You're welcome there were some bugs though when the text would go from English to Spanish.  Also, I hope you finish it. :)

Awesome :)

You put a lot of love into this game, and it shows can't wait to see what you create next. :)

This is my playthrough of the demo game To eat a God.  I am not sure about this one but I had some giggles and enjoyed it so far.  Can't wait to see what is next.  

If you go into preferences you can pick english. :)

Will this game ever come out?  Waiting chewing my pillow in anticipation!

That is very good!

You know there is no endings in this game yet it's in development.

Awesome drawings.

I really wanted to play it but can't download it as it just goes to web html indexes.  Hope it gets fixed

Making Noodles Scary.  I love noodles so much, why did this game make me cringe now when I eat my favorite food!  

I had the misfortune of falling in love with this cute kitty cat who was something out of a Cthulhu horror book.  There are multiple endings and the game changes each time you play it, which I thought was very cool.   I do enjoy the writing, but it can get a little drawn out and you're just waiting for something to happen.   But love the dynamics of the game! :)

Creepy short game about a Dog the main horror is why nobody is eating breakfast except you.  I am still wiping the coffee off my shirt from that jump scare.  I would have liked a bit more interactions but otherwise not bad except some glitches here and there.