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seanarthurmachado

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A member registered Feb 28, 2025

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This is supposed to be a VISUAL NOVEL. A novel should "SHOW not TELL".  All that happens is you have a few backgrounds that change and text says they "she kills you".

No world building.  No background.  No story, not even a hint.

You saying "she kills you" without ever giving even an imagined reason for any of this is not a plot.  Not a story.   

This shouldn't be "version 1.0" since that indicates a complete playable game.  This is barely a demo.

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Not good in current form.  HORROR needs the player to be involved.  Immersed in the story.  Because there IS no story its boring.

I was really hoping for something interesting but I was disappointed.

You have the choice of "wear a mask" or "don't wear a mask".  That's it.

If you "don't wear a mask" you get railroaded around locations (with no story happening, and no choices) until you are killed by an NPC with no explanation.

If you "wear a mask" you get told you can "never be yourself" and be a boy wearing a skirt or else someone will kill you.  Then it ends.

Don't know what this is, but it's not a game.  Barely even a scene in a game.