This is supposed to be a VISUAL NOVEL. A novel should "SHOW not TELL". All that happens is you have a few backgrounds that change and text says they "she kills you".
No world building. No background. No story, not even a hint.
You saying "she kills you" without ever giving even an imagined reason for any of this is not a plot. Not a story.
This shouldn't be "version 1.0" since that indicates a complete playable game. This is barely a demo.
There is a hint when the game says:
"While you are walking you can see how the thoughts and words of people create a girl who wears medical gown with blood on it"
In the story She is not even real, she is the rendering of what the say about the main character.
Anyway i will update this game and i will try to make this game better so again thank you for the review and feedback.
PD: i realeased a small update and i changed "make" to "create" and one more thing i will use all your feedback i think you are right in almost everything
