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Replied to AriLuu in BLACK comments
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Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it even though you don't normally like scary things :D 

I plan to make longer games in the future *fingers crossed*. The next one will still be horror, but after that,  I'd like  to explore other genres (I even have a draft for an  otome  game up my sleeve, ah ah) so I hope I won't disappoint!

Btw, I'm just like you, but I squeeze the living daylights out of a stuffed ikea carrot...don't tell anyone

Replied to xan471 in BLACK comments

Thank you so much! In the download section there's a walkthrough file that could help ;) but if you want to find the correct picks on your own


**SPOILERS**

always be mean with the creature and, when you are presented with the choice, kill him.  Then, remember to check inside the cave. I hope it won't be too  hard after seeing ending 5

Replied to Skeletom in BLACK comments

Thanks!

Posted in White comments

Hi! I wanted to play tha game, but got an error immediately after selecting the difficulty level:

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############################################################################################
FATAL ERROR in
action number 1
of  Step Event0
for object player:

Push :: Execution Error - Variable Get 100213.madatk(100172, -2147483648)
at gml_Object_player_Step_0
############################################################################################

Thank you! What you wrote really means a lot :)

The nature of the "ship" was intentionally left ambiguous, but if you get Ending 1

*SPOILERS*

by choosing not to stay with the kid, you will exit the cave alone and find out you are on an alien planet so...definitely a space ship ;)  

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Hi! I didn't know how to reply on the question you left in the ratings, so I'll answer you here ^^

I tried to write you a pronunciation of my name but failed XD so here's a link to the trusty google translate,  by clicking the audio icon you can hear how it sounds:  https://translate.google.it/#it/en/schiva%20frecce ;)

Replied to Gardares in BLACK comments
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Ok, I spotted the problem, I'll update a fixed version as soon as possible :) thank you for telling me

edit: reuploaded

Replied to Gardares in BLACK comments

mmm...I will look into it. Were you playing in English or in Russian?

Thank you! :3

Replied to Mister in BLACK comments

Thank you! :)

Replied to NerdVine in BLACK comments

Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it ;)

You flatter me, Mr. Potter! XD (great username, ahah)

But seriously, thank you so much for the nice feedback and gameplay ;) I'll go watch it now

Thank YOU for making the game! And don't worry about the keyboard, it's just something that came to mind (I hope I didn't sound harsh, because I didn't mean to - when writing in english I always struggle and fail at conveying emotions D:) so don't worry. I think adding just a few subtle hints is a good idea - when the realization hits the player in the end, I think it will be really powerful :) 

Creepy game! I had fun playing it, and I think you did an amazing job with the audio , it really helps with the immersion  (so much that I had to keep the volume low most of the time and minimize the screen in certain scary parts, ahaha XD)

I have some "technical" feedbacks, if you'd like to hear them:

in the setts menu, the white words on the right merge with the white background, so they are a bit hard to read  (it's not that big of an issue but I think it could be improved - btw, I LOVE the main menu,  it feels very professional) 

and 

**BEWARE, SPOILERS BELOW**


the code on the door requires the player to have an american keyboard - people from around the world may not figure it out and could get stuck (It's not an impossible thing to realize and solve, one can easily google the picture but...who knows. Maybe it could be a problem for someone? Just a thought).

About the story: I got one of the "wake up" endings first, then got the Trapped one. I then replayed to keep my sanity higher, and finally got the true ending and ending II: I think they were ok endings, but  maybe I was expecting something stranger or maybe some "hints" that lead to that outcame, I don't know...so they didn't really make an impact on me, but maybe it's just because I've played too much games, don't take it as a critique. Overall, in fact, I liked the feel of the game and I think it's cool. 


**END SPOILERS**

So, keep up the good work! Can't wait to see what you come up with next ;) 

Wow, thank you! That's very nice of you to say :)

Thank you so much for your gameplay! The "never eaten a banana before" killed me XD

Replied to Skydjinn in BLACK comments

Ok :) thank you very much

Replied to Skydjinn in BLACK comments
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Hi thanks for the gameplay! Please, let me know what can be improved in your opinion, I'm always open to suggestions to make better games :)

And if you've got the time, could you also point out the grammar errors? I'm not a native, and apart from the "lounges" thing I don't know what else has to be corrected. Thank you.

Thank you! What you wrote really means a lot :)

Replied to xDevyl in BLACK comments

Awesome gameplay! I really enjoyed watching it, and I'm  happy you liked the game ;)

That's great! I'm sending you a mail ;)

I'm really glad you enjoyed it! And I'm really flattered by your review, thank you so much :) 

Replied to Nazon in BLACK comments

Sorry for the late reply! And no, there's no cursing ;)

Thank you, I hope you will like them ;)

I do, actually: I'm working reeeeally slowly on the next project, a new horror game with lots of choices and survival aspects completely unrelated to Black, and I've also got ideas for other non-horror stories for future games. But since I'm alone working on them and life got pretty busy I'm afraid it's going to take a while ^^' but not too long, I hope.

Thank you, Famed, for your kind words and also for the gameplay: I'm always happy when someone makes a new one, so I'll definitely go watch it!

I'm really happy that you enjoyed the experience (the fact you "immersed" in the story is especially great,  because that's exactly what I hoped players would do) and I do apologize for those grammar mistakes: hopefully I'll fix them all in the next update ;)


 

No problem! Moving is really time consuming, I can understand the situation very well. So thank you even more for offering your help :) 

Based on what you and other YouTubers said in your gameplays I already tried to modify some of the main sentences, but if you still want to check for other mistakes I'm sending you an email with the dialogues. I'm in no hurry so feel free to send it back  whenever you like ;)

Thanks to YOU for playing my game and for making a gameplay :)

Thank you for your gameplay ;)

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Thank you, that's great!  Yes, the ninth ending is the ?? one, so congrats for finding them all!

I'll gladly go search for them on YouTube, then ;)

 

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Thank you for your gameplay...you Rock!  Quite literally ;D (ok, bad pun)

For real, though: I enjoyed  watching you play my game and seeing you having fun with it :) I think you have a great narrating voice and your inquisitive approach made the viewing experience really entertaining and engaging...I can only say keep up the great work! 

That unpronounceable name probably already gave it away (read "skiva frecce" with the "cc" read like the "ch" in "church"=arrow dodger) but I'm no native. So, if at the end you were serious about it, I think I'll really take you up on your offer: I'm DEFINITELY in need of a shiny spell checker in armor. Plus, I'd be forever in your debt AND grateful for the assistance. 

So let me know if I can contact you for it, and maybe for future games, too (but ONLY if you want to and if/when you have time) 

I also wanted to thank you for the follow ;)

Replied to Nom_Nom in BLACK comments

Thank you so much for leaving your impressions on the game! It's great to know you enjoyed it :)

And you're right,  it's a short game - mainly because I had a time limit to complete it and I had to rush through it (it was originally made for the Nanoreno17 game jam, I entered late so I had only two weeks left to complete it) and also because I wanted the players to "fill in the blanks", so I feared expanding more on the story would ruin the feel of it all. But if I change my mind and come up with an interesting story I think I could make a sequel, in the future...who knows 

Thank you for your gameplay! I'm glad you liked the game :)

Replied to foveros in BLACK comments

Thank you for your feedback and kind words, I'm glad you liked it :)

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Hi, serabourg. 

I'd like to thank you for taking the time to leave a feedback, because it helps me a lot and normally even the smallest one brightens my day...but I don't think I was prepared for your comment...seriously! You have no idea how happy it made me,  and how your words motivate me into creating more and more games incredible people like you might enjoy.

As for other websites, for now I don't have any, but I'm planning on creating a tumblr or twitter to post updates/sketches of my future projects - I already have some decent concepts, but sadly right now my life got really busy and I don't have time to work on them **sigh** BUT! When I get back on track, I'll make sure to let you know ;)

No problem about the "Dirt poor" thing, by the way - I can relate :) **jumps on the broke train**       

Hi! Thanks for your feedback and gameplay!

This project was originally conceived as a stand-alone story, with an open ending that gave players freedom to imagine the aftermath they liked best, so right now I'm not sure about a sequel: if it's not done right I could spoil the original feel of the game. BUT if in the future I get inspired with an interesting concept/follow up story and people would like to play it...why not ;)

This was incredibly beautiful...kudos to all of you for all the hard work that went into creating this masterpiece! 

Replied to Hannah in BLACK comments

Thank you for your kind words and also for rating the game, I'm really glad you liked it :)