Totally understandable, appreciate that feedback. I wanted to keep it simple for my first project (and even just first time writing). If I pursued a second project, I'd probably add choices now that I'm more confident.
And ya, Ive heard some people wanting to change the name but the name being what it is actually has a purpose within the story and will transform as the story goes on.
The story is kinetic (no choices) so you don't particular "play" as someone, but I will say generally you spend a good amount of time reading from the perspective of the female lead.
There is also an unofficial android version on F95zone.to (page 10 of the Naomi thread). Keep in mind I didn't make it but I downloaded it and it worked well for me. The guys make android ports for lots of VNs but exercise caution as always.
Right now, priority is on overall development of the next update but I'll definitely be looking into what it takes in making an Android version as I see it is a popular ask.
I started reading VNs on Android first as well so I get the desire for it haha.
As far as apk, hoping to spend some time on developing one for next update, but depends on the pace of the development.
There is an unofficial version from an known android port discord on my novel's f95zone thread (page 10 from estrada). I downloaded it and it looks pretty solid, but of course that's up to you as I didn't officially make it.
You know, I love Pale Carnations but that wasn't actually my inspiration. Since a lot of focus is on Naomi, I wanted a clever way to make all sex acts that usually don't provide pleasure for a female (oral, handjobs, etc) feel good for the female as well.
Hi, good question. Currently, I am focusing on finishing Act 2 Part 1 so I haven't dove too deep into it yet.
I see it's a popular request, so I'll bump it up in priority! My biggest concern is how to deal with the game size. Part 2 isn't as long, so I think I can devote some dev time during the next cycle to figure that out.
In the meantime, there is an unofficial version on f95 (page 3 on the thread). I played it and it works mostly well, although there is a bit of audio compression.
Edit: I spoke too soon, just read the news on the website. I'll prioritize setting up a substar for updates just in case but even there payment processors are a concern. My content should hopefully always be available for free on F95zone. More to come.
It should be just like an update. So you'd download the new update and put those files in the same place as your current game location. When you load in, the credit screen should have a "Move to Act 2" button, and you'll jump right into the new content. If you haven't reach the credits, the novel will just move from Act 1 to Act 2 automatically.
I'm overhauling the "filthy content" choices to be able to pick individual fetishes. Old save files will get a notice about the change and you'll be able to change it in options menu at any time.
Hope that helps, always happy to answer questions!
I didn't create one but someone created an unofficial port found on f95zone website. I can't link it directly but if you find the Naomi thread there, it's in the comments section.
Nothing at the moment. I may consider setting one up before the next release if people really want to support me monetarily. A review showing people like the novel is more than enough for me though!
