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A cool and terrifying story. Give a hug for me to your mother. I’m sure I could have done the same thing for the same reasons.

I’ll definetly add an example. And your idea to make it loopable, that is clever. And change the english version. I have to check the french one too, to be honest I’m not sure it’s more clear in this one. Sometime, when you have your nose on your work, you can’t take a step back and see if its understandable or not. Thank you for the feadback !

I guess you can play like that, good idea ! Let me know if you do ! I did not mention it earlier, but you art for this story is really cute. In general you game covers are pretty cool !

Making stories is so fun ! I’m happy you like it ! The game is simple, but explaining how to play was a challenge. Maybe I should write a gamplay example, what do you think ?

That’s a cool story ! Thank you for sharing it ! Will you continue the story and find out where the crystal came from ?

Thank you for the nice comment! I’m much more an illustrator than a graphic designer, so I did my best and I’m glad you like it ! I’m always curious about the stories that emerge with this game. It’s always personnal, and tells a lot about the player.

I’ll be honored ! Please do it !

Hello, I did work on a french translation for a friend who wanted to try it. Here is a link to the pdf and odt files : https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1o7_pE1a3i2vYVyh4xbZ1w8ftuvTVz43y?usp=drive_link

I only added my name as the translator. I hope you don’t mind ?

Mais c’est super mignon comme idée ! Je vais essayer !

Bonjour Dan qui Dam J’ai fait un jeu qui pourrait rentrer dans la Hermits Club Collection : Celles qui sont nées dans les étoiles

C’est un jeu solo, en une page, qui se deroule dans un vaisseau spatial generationnel. Il est basé sur la mecanique de People Places and Perils de Cezar Capacle. Il y a une version en francais et une version en anglais. Zéro IA, j’ai dessiné le petit cosmonaute moi même.

Merci d’avoir lu, bonne journée à toi.

Un outil bien utile. Merci !

This game is so cute (and realistic ha ha) You did a good job with the French translation, I think it’s payable like it is. Maybe I can help you to make it a 24 words game, si tu veux ?

J’espère que ça va te plaire !

C’est trop adorable ce mini jeu, bravo !

Merci ! C’était trop tentant de hacker ce jeu, j’espère que ma version marche aussi bien.

I felt the "what happend" entry "they poured a spoonful of salt in they're beverage" may lack of replayability.

It may be better just to ad "or something else..." ?

I love it ! I would be glad to translate it into french, if you allow me to. With proper credit and links, of course.