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Just a gigantic ,gargantuas even, thanks for such a detailed feedback. I have been composing for 2 years now, but I wasn’t making enough compositions to get to the level you would expect from this time of learning, but I guess it’s just my pace. About vs Loneliness tho, I was really running out of creativity closer to the end of the jam and I really needed to make a final boss theme. So I took the inspiration from hollow knight’s boss theme, sealed vessel, the song is also very similar to the omori example you gave. I now see it too, that keeping the entire song more consistent would have been a better choice and I’ll note that for my future works. Again, thank you for taking the time to write all of this, I really appreciate having such a feedback!)

I’m so glad you enjoyed:D Tracks do feel a bit disjointed from one another ,so I tried tying things together with motifs, but it’s cool that you enjoyed the difference between them as well! Gigantic thanks for feedback! 

man I just want to thank you for committing to this jam so much and commenting on every submission and I’m so glad you liked mine:D 

I’m not sure if it gets any better than this. It sounds hauntingly beautiful, I can’t believe it was just made last week, it sounds like a score from some beloved movie classic. It’s surreal how good the orchestra is, probably, only the real one would sound more organic. Amazing work!

IT SOUNDS SO WELL MIXED IT SOUNDS SO BEAUTIFUL! Amazing way to portray time loop through glitching/automating sounds. Also ,can’t help but feel, like the character in the story wanted the summer to never end and college to never start, amazing story telling! 

IT’S SO GOOD! Loved how it’s basically prog rock. Also insanely good drums/percussion. Got me bopping a lot. Amazing job!

Thank you! I’m really glad you took time to read the story and also to write so much feedback! Probably the most feedback I’ve gotten yet! Appreciate it)

Yeaaaaah mixing was always an overlooked skill by me ,I feel like now I should finally get into it. Giant thanks for feedback too! 

Like Asher said in the comment, it feels like the chords and the melody are playing in two different keys. While practice does make perfect, I recommend watching some videos on music theory, the basis of it, and than trying to apply it. That being said the melodies on their own are pretty good so there is definitely a potential there. Keep going dude:D

hmm this submission feels …very augmented.. although jokes aside augmented chords here do creat an awesome cold soundscape ,awesome work! 

All the songs really tickle my brain in a good way AND DAMN THE BOSSFIGHT THEME IS SO TOUHOU CODED IT IS AWESOME!!!

That’s amazing! Submissions with basically a full soundtrack done still amaze me! I especially loved all the tracks labeled with scenes and the boss theme! Awesome job! 

giant thanks for feedback! I’ll make sure to listen to yours too when I have the time! 

peak recognizes peak!

got to listen to it before anybody else. Can asure-you it's peak

making almost an entire sountrack through weekends is POWERFUL. Also unrelated but after listening I have a feeling you would make amazing prog rock)

One of the best on the jam honestly