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To be honest, the ending feels far too rushed. Although there was some foreshadowing, the part that should have served as the story's climax was glossed over in a few strokes. Still, given your team's circumstances, it's within an acceptable range. On a side note, your English translation still has quite a few issues: the option at the end of Chapter 2 leading into Chapter 3 wasn't translated, character names and prompts remain in Russian, and some sentences have gone missing. I hope that in the future this work can receive a more complete and well-executed conclusion, and I also hope your team will bring us better works.

Wonderful writing and incredible plots. I could easily submerge in this game 'cause the writing is just so vivid. 

Following things might include some spoilers:

Sanghoon's character is one of the most outstanding part of this game. Just like the ones stayed in closet in their teenage years, the blurry feelings of sexual orientation (By the way, the double meaning of this word is all over the text and when I found that out, it's just actually surprising and moving) and sexuality, the special emotions, the tangled mind against the old tradition, and also the jealousy, are really really impressive. The author's writing skill is still perfect. Simple word but delicate structure of the plot. The echo between the sex of Mia and and the sex with Marty just makes me fascinate.

Marty's character is also fun. He is just the one who was badly affected by the toxic masculinity of Bloodline frat party and he never realized. It just emphasizes that how harm of these patriarchal frarernity things could do harm to the guys in it. Yeah, he is not a real brother, and he can never be that, but after these years' unconscious effect, he just became a murder and made the twisted "brother" concept become his lifestyle. To be honest,  he should be sympathized, 'cause he couldn't recognize who he really is in the end and became the worst version that Sanghoon could be. If he could open his mind to HJ from the start, would things change? I guess so.

Though what I thought is that Sanghoon would be more aggressive for the whole thing, the end that they rebel the frat party is still good. I always like to see people get rid of those traditions of toxic masculinity.

It's a really good game. I love the cute wolfboi and the awesome art style~

By the way, is there a max level? I found the level stuck when it came to about 25.

And there is a small bug: I had an issue that when I click the chat button in cafe, sometimes the old text would cover the newer ones. 

Some advice: I hope there would be a gallery to review the old events~ they're very s*xy. And I hope the mini game in kitchen could be a little shorter 'cause wolfboi did get hungry easily XD

It's short but fun. I love the art style and the novel designs

Collecting short stories is a good idea and provides a great reading experience. I am surprised to see a short furry story related to the myth of Uruk, and look forward to future updates XD

hmm, some part of this story is fun to read, but I think some of them should be expanded, especially the Jax part.

Also, the AI-generated pictures are kinda too much.  I mean, many pictures are too rough and I could see  human face... while some of them just look the same. Less pictured but more text would help a lot (especially for the hidden explicit part of the story, I think they could be better with more prompt)

Funny game

looking forward to it uwu

wish u good luck uwu i love ur work

The game is so cruel... It just made me feel beaten and faint