hmm, some part of this story is fun to read, but I think some of them should be expanded, especially the Jax part.
Also, the AI-generated pictures are kinda too much. I mean, many pictures are too rough and I could see human face... while some of them just look the same. Less pictured but more text would help a lot (especially for the hidden explicit part of the story, I think they could be better with more prompt)