Thank you for playing our game and leaving a comment and a rating! We're glad you ended up liking it despite finding the theme dubious. 🥰
When you say it needs proofreading, have you noticed any inconsistencies with pronouns or do you mean it generally to be careful and keep an eye out?
We tried our best to proofread it multiple times and test the game, but it's hard for us to notice the small details after so many replays with all the possible variations. Still, if there are errors we missed, we'll gladly pass the game again to find and fix them.