The prose is immaculate and beautiful. It's all perfectly succinct and flows really, really well. The story itself was also heartbreaking—I'm gonna call my Mom.
Loved the prose here a ton. You really touched on the feeling of social anxiety, that insane mix of irrational fear, accompanied by knowing on some level it is irrational. I enjoyed it a lot!
I loved the prose here, and the hopeful note things ended on really felt touching. Dialogue could have used another pass, but was still really effective for me. I enjoyed it.
All I can say is that I loved this. It's a beautiful mix of sarcasm and heartbreak and love all tied up into a perfect little package, with insanely good presentation to boot. I have no notes. Keep making things.
