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really promising foundation so far! the gameplay is simple but has a nice loop and fairly satisfying combat & movement. character creation and design is quite impressive! the sex scenes & mechanics are quite cute so far. for sure want to see this get developed further.

so, my points of feedback for the dev:

* level progression (collect XP orbs and feed into teleporter to increase level) is never actually explained, no counter for how much Orb you have, no obvious indication you can interact with the central pillar. should be a priority, to help players understand how to progress at all. other than that the gameplay is actually quite fun! I think I see the risk of rain inspiration: move fast around the stage, fight guys, open chests, go to teleporter, continue. it's good and it works! do get rid of the teleporter ragdoll though, it's quite annoying especially since it can take you off the map.

* the writing.. well, not everyone is a writer at all, but there are a lot of really basic spelling mistakes just about everywhere. for sure needs basic proofreading and punctuation at the very least, if characters are to be more than just their appearance.

* i was really pleasantly surprised to find out you can just... beat up almost anyone you meet and take their stuff! that I feel like is a thread you could pull on a LOT further -- having characters recur with memory, based on how you treat them, like ending up with a rival or lover? making People a lot tougher to fight in general to make the reward more commensurate? fucking people/getting fucked as you win/lose in such a situation? this is interesting. I think you should work with this.

* another gameplay quirk I found really interesting is that you can hold powers like fireball, and they recharge. this slows you down a lot but lets you cast two spells at the same time eventually. i like that! this seems unintentional, but you should keep it.

* a lot of the sex is really quite nice for what it is. but personally a lot of the allure/idle animations are exaggerated/fast to the point they get silly. like, those tits are bouncing WAY too fast. personally i'd love if those got slowed down just a bit. also, POV and more gameplay implications for sex are my number one suggestion; toys, potions, body transformations, debuffs, fucking the magic skeleton guys... those kinds of things! speaking of sex... what's up with the canine dick? it's just the same as the human dick but with a sheath. not as advertised :p

i think that's what's most pertinent for now. despite being insanely janky and obviously just a demo of what can be possible, i really like what's possible. please do keep at it, and please do embrace the emergent possibilities!