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I totally feel that. But the same person who wrote this one (146tym) gave me another weight gain short story that is complete that i wanna convert into a vn. Its short but sweet so look forward to that if i ever get time aaaaaa

Sadly this project won't be continued! Everyone has been too busy to work on it and I started focusing on In the Spotlight X3 I'm glad you enjoyed it for what it is! I have some short stories to make into -complete- projects, but between work, a comic I'm working on and ITS it's been a lot XD

It was meant to be longer, legit next chapter was raunchy but unfortunately this is the end of the project. So I've edited details now. Sorry!

Yay! :D I am working on a Halloween thing for now, but I'm excited to get the last of Chapter 2 out <3

yeeee thank you ;; <3 I will keep going if only for your love of Adam, Pink 🫡

For real tho I appreciate you <3

Okay I fixed and tested it! Should be good to go :)

Shoot! Thanks for letting me know. I tested it so thats super weird.

Long term this will have nsfw scenes, but once i figure the coding out youll be able to toggle those scenes on and off since the game's focus is the story.(hopefully by next part)

It's on indefinite hiatus since I'm not the one who wrote it and they are extremely busy. I might do a remaster at some point but for now it's been shelved unfortunately

This will be released in chunks. Not sure when the full will be out since this is something I'm doing in my off time :) Gunna have the first part of part 2 out in a few weeks though!

There is a lot of Bi food in this VN to come. I personally relate to the struggle xD

I was too excited and tired, I still missed a lot of my misused tenses. U_U; Not the editors fault. Being a noob VN maker along with rusty at writing I missed some things LOL

waaaah thank you! It'll have a minor update tomorrow(or whenever the embargo is over :O ) but I'm quite far into chapter 2! :DIt'll be coming soon <3 I'm so glad you like it! 

Great job! I don't know if anyone else ran into the bugs I ran into, but I was able to get past them easy enough. I would love to know more about this MC. I can infer the homophobia and family troubles because of it, but it feels like there is something deeper below it, a nugget of gold to pull out on the MC travels. I understand why anyone else might be frustrated with the end(the end froze for me, so I assume that was the end), but I don't hate open endings like that. Sometimes things are just, the end. A nice read overall! 

Waaah thank you again <3 You are very kind 🥺

I had a ton of fun reading this in stream, it took me back to my younger years and while it wasn't IMVU for me it was like looking back into a time machine. It was incredibly relatable and makes good use of nostalgia and teenage angst/self discovery to write this plot.

The music in combination with the themes gave me chills at some points. The art was top notch. The writing, despite a typo here and there was well paced and thought out.

Great job guys! An instant favorite

ahhhh this is so kind, and I appreciate that you were willing to go through it despite the weight gain warning, how I plan to portray that is definitely different than one might expect. 
I'm horrible with discussing compliments but please know I really appreciate all you've had to say, eeee ;v; thank you

but the comments I can respond to

"evicted for depression and mood swings" - I miiiight be leaning a little hard on whether or not Emmie is a reliable narrator trying to cope in her own mind with this line. The comment she makes about Henni is closer to the truth. It's not super helpful for the reader without spelling that out, but there were a couple lines like this that I sprinkled in as an attempt for that effect! 

"I've never had someone catfish me back" This line is definitely something I wanted to show her total obliviousness and her own hypocrisy that she tries to project on him. It would be better to hint that she's never been catfished in a way she cares about before. I could definitely write it more clear, thanks for pointing it out :O

"Why are we having this discussion like besties gossiping about the date" This got a bit of a clarity edit already, that edit is going up asap on July 1st ;o;, but the jist of it is a theme with Emmie and relationships.

Chapter 2 is 10k words already and has some programming I've never done before needing to be figured out. Woo! On the way ovob

I read it so it is remembered in my heart ;c; I came to respond to you and my tired butt literally spammed through the delete button. My heart may have fallen out my ass 

As a dumb bear, I deleted this from the jam on accident, so I lost all your lovely and very helpful comments QnQ I apologize.

Loved your approach, and as frustrating as they can be, I liked the idea of rebuilding your memories with puzzles! I appreciated the "solve for me" once I'd gotten all the memories. I get really lost in maze things and I only had a small amount of time to play this today. The story was fun to watch come together, the wolf's voice coming through "as a ghost" when he was likely the only one not a ghost was clever.

I appreciate this little story. A little spin(ha) on the circular nature of all reality.

I had a toooon of fun reading this! The characters are cute, the sprites are cute and very full of emotion in their poses and the topic of gender and body fluidity is something I can really relate to. Thank you for this sweet entry! I really enjoyed it <3

I wish I was better at writing ratings, as this deserves so much better than I can speak about it. I was so fun to read, and I love how it made me actually have to pull away from the mic a few times to laugh. Lots of emotions. Lots of fun. I can't wait to read it again once it is completed! :D

thank you for saying so! <3
I'm halfway through the outline for the second chapter, so I'm really happy to hear that you guys like them! aaa

I'm perplexed, but for something whipped out in 24 hours on time it came and it did what it could! I didn't understand how the theme fit in. But I think that submitting something is still fun enough :) If there was meant to be symbolism with the car it definitely whooshed over my head LOL 
Congrats on completing it in time! xD

I love the retro vibe like others have said; it really took me back to sitting with family and watching home movies. It was cozy and had a small twinge of sadness and regret that nostalgia always brings out for me. 
It was a lovely read. Thank you for your work! This was very enjoyable ^^

We already talked, but I feel weird leaving this comment unresponded to. Hiiiii

It's a threat to all viewers to come back to future chapters to make sure I don't fumble the story LOL

Dawwww the loading screen after the end was precious

great job on this! It was a longer read but it was a nice slow burn :)

This was a cute read! It gave me some "old school flash game" vibes and I mean that in a positive way. Very nostalgic and cozy

of course! Great job :)

I dont condone or like genAI :/ its hard for people to tell is all i meant

This had some very dark moments but also some absurdist cute moments. I'm afraid of spoiling anything, but them talking about the horrible things at the end while being loving was cute/funny just because I wasn't expecting the characters to be so cool with it.