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On Her Black Wings

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Just got done with the new up date today. I really love what I'm seeing and where it has been going this far.  Again I went with the orphan background and was really pleased in the ways she stood out. Mainly the talking to Theo and being reminded of Spencer. It was such a bittersweet moment for me.

I can also see the ways were the backgrounds stick out again and differentiate. As I said I only played the one so I don't know what is there. But I could definitely see the interactions with Astrid and Nico going a bit different with the military background. But what I imagine is the real star of this update is the wastelander background. I have decided I have to do a character in that background just so I can see their reunion with Theo. I'm also interested to see if the soul trial goes differently with a character having that background.

One of the most unexpected but most appreciated, at least on my part, was how some of the choices were reworded. There are two that stick out in my mind, which is kind of hazy being I restarted and played it over two days. The first being the choice of praise on the orphan's acceptance letter. The words "lone wolf" were replace with something else though I don't remember what. When I read that before the update my first thoughts were that it was confusing as to what was meant by that and why would the military, whom I would think would believe success comes more from their soldiers working together than not, would praise being a lone wolf as a stand out trait. The other being the decision when the S-class destroys the ground and the MC and others need to climb up and over the broken terrain to escape. The choices to "use your strength/gadgets to save yourself" being changed to "use your strength/gadgets to save yourself and others but not taking risks." Honestly, the best part of this one is that any MC that would choose it sounds like less of a prick now. At least that's how it feels to me even if it is essentially the same choice. It adds nuance that would have been easy not to. I always appreciate some good nuance.

But just how complex one's character in this can be is a real draw for me. In fact I knew it was a real win in that department when the first thing you have to choose is whether to save a woman and her child whom are more real because they are right in front of you. Or abandon them to complete your mission ideally helping to save hundreds of lives whom you'll never meet and therefor will always be kind of nebulous. That in and of itself was amazingly written and made me feel kind helpless no matter what I choose. I mean that in the most complimentary way. The worse thing one can say about a writer's work is that it made you feel nothing. But then you went the extra mile and allowed us to tell a character who seems to genuinely care just how conflicted you are about the decision. Honestly telling Will that I left a mother and child to die horribly so I could complete my mission was the right thing to do and I would do it again. But also it would haunt me and I would have to find a way to live with the weight of that decision. It was very cathartic and made for a character so much more complex than I was hoping for. I imagine it would have been very easy not to include that making the work load less. But I can not describe how much little things like that improve the experience.

Thanks for making this and I can't wait for more to come. 

Really loved this, and can't wait for more. I really love how the different backgrounds feel completely different and like characters coming from different backgrounds literally come from different places with their own unique perspective.

Have to say I am a big fan of orphan background. It gives so much to build a character around, but more importantly it has Spencer. I guess I'm a sucker for a terrorist first love.

This was so very enjoyable. There are so many things I could gush about, that this comment could be the equal of Das Kapital. But I absolutely must go over a few of my favorites.

The Characters are amazing, of course quality characters are the quickest way to my heart. Everybody has there own distinct personalities and unique relationship with the MC. I love to see their interactions with them, or in my case her. Her fathers are delightful, and I could really feel the love they had for her, and it was easy for me to see the love she has for them. Their dynamic as a family is cheerful and familiar without being tropy. I honestly can't wait to get back and introduce them to all my new friends. One of the things that really hit me with them is how they reacted to the MCs episodes caused by the cursed. It just felt so real. As a child I had some serious illness, so that hit me and hit me hard with how I just kind of knew everything they were going through because I had seen it in my real life.

The Twinflowers are so lovable, especially Lakota. My characters are never hetro women and rarely bi or pan. Yet I couldn't help want him to be a LI. Though I did get the satisfaction of playing out that my MC and Lakota both had a crush on Willow, but she was more secretive about it because she was so unsure about forming more intimate bonds. It also hit me hard as him starting a family of his own meant he didn't have as much time to spend with my MC. That felt very real as well.  Oswin was very fun to get to know as well. As I set of in, chapter three I think, I was complete invested in reestablishing the MCs friendship with him. He was never going to be a RO I would seriously consider. He is not his brother obviously. But I did feel deeply saddened when I thought our friendship was gone and when I was greatly relieved when he wanted to save our friendship just like my MC. And of course there are the twins. I do love them and really want to see more of them. And did take a minute, but I about tipped over my chair when I realized that, "Gods, they literally named their children after flowers." They are one of those people.

The companions are great two. I love how each of them have their own secret that I am excited to learn about. Zhan was quickly my favorite and found her way into my heart. Duri and Rune have their charms and I would love to find out how those Romances are like, but Zhan is just so adorable. Her secret it one is one I'm most excited to find out about. Also as of right now, I'm beside my self with worry for her. And lastly but definitely not least we have Champagne, the she-wolf and bestest girl. I love her and if any thing bad should happen to her I would surely die. Please do not let anything bad happen to them. or if you do at least give a John Wick route. 

The las thing is how please the god of destruction isn't portrayed as irredeemable evil and cruel. I never see that and am so happy somebody else realizes that death and destruction are a natural part of life and how you can this.