Great work! Way to go, participating in [====== game jams.
(extra characters are Scout's review, I don't have the heart to correct her grammar or translate to English.)
I think that your backstory could use some more depth and a few passes in workshop. Are we in the gritty reboot phase or is this the cynical post-modern version of the character? You should definitely consider motivations and where this character is coming from. Does their situation warrant a more explosive response, maybe? Or do you think that maybe this is their effort to re-mold themselves via abject violence. Where do you see this character in a year? ten years?
Otherwise, great job!szesZCqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqq