my review for chapter 3:
Absolute cinema. that was... wow. as always, great story. again i love the dynamics of each character, as well as the development of us (the mc). i genuinely forgot that this had some lewd elements to it after a while since i was so immersed into reading the story lol.
i think a great thing i noticed is that, every action or dialogue made by each character felt natural or logical based on their context or who they are as a character which just made it even more immersive as a whole. another thing is the way it all just connects together, by that i mean (to avoid spoilers) how a characters circumstances align with another characters circumstances and how they find the common ground or something like that, idk lol
what i do know is man, i WISH it was longer TwT or maybe i just speedran through it? XD either way, this was a great chapter with lots of development and setting up for the next chapter(s)
as for my criticisms; i wish there were more lewd or spicy scenes with eve or saki. thats it XD THATS LITERALLY MY CRITICISM, me saying that theres a lack of sex scenes lol but honestly the great story compensates for that so im not complaining that much.
overall, great story, great development, hoping to see more in the coming months (PLEASE IM BEGGING YOU)
10/10 lol oki bye :>
Normi3
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just finished chapter 2. what. a. cliffhanger. I WANT AND NEED MOREEEEE, but im willing to wait for it :> AS LONG AS IT TAKES
im also gonna donate sometime in the near future, i dont know when but i will, i can promise you that. this is just that good, its like a breath of fresh air. there are funny moments and serious moments and all the other moments too XD god i love this, thank you for this. i hope and wish you the best O Great LopaPhi 馃檹
holy, you definitely cooked with this update. I AM INLOVE WITH THE STORY. you know whats funny is, i sometimes forget that there are ecchi parts to this because IM JUST SO IMMERSED IN THE STORY, ESPECIALLY NOW THAT THE STORY IS EXPANDED UPON. god, its been a while since i last felt like this for a game... AND A VN AT THAT. the sheer excitement of wanting to figure out how things get resolved or how they progress, the giddy feeling as i write this comment, this takes me back to when i first played zelda or something lol. and the best part is, IM NOT EVEN DONE WITH CHAPTER 2 YET LIKE WHAT (probably because i play like 2 hours per day lol). this VN is probably my favorite one (yes, my number one favorite) because it has all these elements like romance, comedy, slice of life, ecchi, and they all blend together to get you immersed in the story. and i think thats what makes me love this so much and why i say its my favorite VN, it just feels like its an actual story not just some made up stuff to get to a certain ending or goal. you got these characters that have such common personalities and yet the way they are introduced in this VN makes it feel like they're unique, which is something i think is quite hard to do.
overall, i love this. thank you for creating and cooking yet another wonderful meal for us to enjoy O great LopaPhi 馃檹
for a visual novel game that's only released for about 2 months, this is quite the hidden gem. the story is great, the characters have depth and a sense of purpose and they arent lackluster... oh and the setup for the next chapter is great as well by the way, although some might think its a bit basic but sometimes you dont have to be great in order to be great... if that makes sense lol.
and the fact that you have to build relationships with the characters as well as NSFW scenes is just the cherry or the icing on top because it just adds that level of realism to the game which, just makes it so much more better in my opinion and this is done so well by the way, great job on that.
everything works well with each other and there isnt a detail that seems out of place. im looking forward to seeing how the story progresses :)
im not usually one to say anything about games or things i download but this one, this one is just... i had to create an account to let my feelings out XD
i do hope this gets more attention because it definitely deserves a lot :>