my review for chapter 3:
Absolute cinema. that was... wow. as always, great story. again i love the dynamics of each character, as well as the development of us (the mc). i genuinely forgot that this had some lewd elements to it after a while since i was so immersed into reading the story lol.
i think a great thing i noticed is that, every action or dialogue made by each character felt natural or logical based on their context or who they are as a character which just made it even more immersive as a whole. another thing is the way it all just connects together, by that i mean (to avoid spoilers) how a characters circumstances align with another characters circumstances and how they find the common ground or something like that, idk lol
what i do know is man, i WISH it was longer TwT or maybe i just speedran through it? XD either way, this was a great chapter with lots of development and setting up for the next chapter(s)
as for my criticisms; i wish there were more lewd or spicy scenes with eve or saki. thats it XD THATS LITERALLY MY CRITICISM, me saying that theres a lack of sex scenes lol but honestly the great story compensates for that so im not complaining that much.
overall, great story, great development, hoping to see more in the coming months (PLEASE IM BEGGING YOU)
10/10 lol oki bye :>