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I'd echo your sentiment; it would've been nice to have a semblance of agency in how you approach each of these ideals, especially when determining whether an active or passive approach was better suited for your particular playthrough. This story has a lot of potential but the lack of proactive interaction we the player receive regarding world interactions, when it's presented as us "driving" Kai, can leave a sour taste.

Overall, I'd say this remains a solid narrative; I'd highly suggest getting an editor to review your grammar and sentence structure. While I'm intrigued by the world, the pace and awkward dialogue can be jarring at times--nothing a good editor coming behind you to do some proofreading can't fix!

"Max! Help me! I'm.. FEELING!"

90's Jim Carrey's in a green suit screaming about the agony of his heart growing? It's me. You beautiful bastard, Drifty, you somehow ripped my cold void of a heart into pieces--but, like, in the best way.