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Hi! I like this text a lot.

While reading I noticed that there might be a part missing or misplaced; in section 4.1.2, locations, there is a reference to "Events track significant plot elements. The number format X/Y shows current/total progress."
I believe this does not belong here, or that a part for E: (events?) is here missing. I hope this helps!

Maybe you know it already, but you can consider joining this jam going on right now: https://itch.io/jam/puzzle-dungeon-jam.

Ultimately it's totally ok as it is :)
I saw it done that the spreads are a unique larger page, anyway, and this way is universal

This is the least important issue ever, but as far as I can tell the two versions seem to be the same file!

Bella traduzione! Potrebbe essere una idea aggiungere anche il link alla versione originale del gioco su itch.io (https://goblinarchives.itch.io/liminal-horror).

HOW ABOUT A VERSION FOR OTHER SYSTEMS?????

Apart from kidding, this looks gorgeous, thank you so much!

If you want, two possible constructive criticisms might be the following:

• Even if how a weapon hits varies from system to system, damage is usually a prerogative of it... You could consider adding a separated column for damage close to weapons in the inventory.
• I love to see these kind of format, but it might help to get inspired to have one filled as inspiring example to download!

Apart from this, great work and thank you so much :)