I'm very enjoying this game so much! one of the best AVN i did say.
Thank you for making good route in this game beside the depraved route one, very very appreciated! for the next updates please always do so, because those characters are so lovely, some hearts might not able to take it, that included me :).
1. Why does it seem like the MC already knows so much about "the realm"? And why aren't the other characters surprised that the MC knows this—as if it were normal? There should be a visible reaction of shock or confusion from the MC, perhaps connecting this new information to the nightmares he frequently had.
2. The MC suddenly displays possessiveness toward the heroine out of nowhere.
There really ought to be a prior connection—some existing affection or respect or responsibility.
Without that, it feels strange.
Take the MC's interactions with Tiffany, for example:
- Tiffany prevents the MC from getting overwhelmed by trivial details from other members at his first academy gathering.
- Tiffany waits two hours for the MC to regain consciousness in the pouring rain.
These moments are perfect opportunities to insert the MC's feelings of affection or respect through internal monologue—thoughts like, "She really looked out for me before; I'm going to protect her!" Alternatively, the MC might hold a principle of selflessly protecting others (though, as the story stands, the MC doesn't seem to possess such a trait yet). Without including these elements, the MC appears indifferent, creating a contradiction with his actual actions.
3. There is a lack of small talk or casual pleasantries in the first-half, making characters interactions feel like mind-reading. Slow down the pacing of conversations; characters should have distinct reactions when approached or spoken to—whether it's tension, awkwardness, nonchalance, masked response or sort of. Right now, the characters' emotions aren't fully coming through in the dialogue.
If these areas are improved, I am certain this game could become a masterpiece rivals Eternum or even better!
Don't let this go to waste... it looks incredibly promising!.
The immersive is there, graphic and sounds, I can feel it, GREAT game Dev! rooting for your success for this game. can't wait for next chapter already!
This Ep3 was so good, such a nice and lovely conversation between them, especially the Fun Talk with Ling near the Campus (she is so damn cute :0) and Emma on the Train (those clingy act warm my heart ToT) it's all feels so natural and lovely. As for the plot, that scene when that terror guy appear while on the train? damn! that was thrilling, and quite immersive, adrenaline boost!! (more actions like this would be great, preferably shoot in the right angles), Miss Pandora really shine in this part!.
Oh shiiiii, I very much liked the humor, and for the story it's reminded me of DOGMA, another great AVN game.
Can't wait to see more updates, when the girls show their affections toward MC, don't forget to add this element, bring love to life always good. Amazing game!
Btw, for it's size the story is a bit short tbh. it's okay i guess, it's not big deal and can be compensated by bringing immersive story experience. overall it's still good, keep the great work Dev. it can be masterpiece.
To Dev, should you added R element or something related, please consider to off the animation by default or by choice or skip button, that was disturbing and not enjoyable, just let player know the idea is enough if you ask me.
I still don't know how to get "Physical education" and "Revenge is best raw" scene, someone here know it? and what about that 2 christmas scene, is it Patreon only?
In this game the MC is female, right? Not my taste but, its okay i guess?. If you want to focus on female audiens, you should have make the characters look more handsome and apealing if you ask me, kinda like some knight in fairy tales maybe? hhh, that would be great, of course it's just my opinion.
