MrLiBurns
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I write for slice-of-life, fantasy, and adult/NSFW games — anything from branching visual novels to quest-driven RPGs. I also bring experience as a game tester (so my scripts are technically clean) and as a narrative consultant (I help other devs polish their stories).
I don’t share full scripts publicly out of respect for my clients’ IP, but I’m happy to send a portfolio on request or complete a test script in your preferred genre. Let’s talk!
You have a story in your head. Maybe even a whole universe. But when you sit down to write — it doesn't come out right. Or it starts well, then dies somewhere in the middle. I help with that.
What I do:
- Fix broken scripts. I find the weak spots — wooden dialogue, plot holes, characters acting out of character — and suggest fixes. No "rewrite everything from scratch" unless it's absolutely necessary.
- Help with structure. You have an idea but don't know where to start? I help break it down: beginning, turning points, conflict, ending. Your story, just with a clear path forward.
- Fix branching narratives. Making a game with choices and variables? I check the logic, make sure branches don't break, and can prototype everything in Twine so you can see it working.
Why me: Two years of writing game scripts — slice-of-life, fantasy, adult, everything in between. I work in Twine, Ren'Py, Java. I build worlds in Obsidian. Plus I have a background in testing, so I know how scripts behave in a real game, not just on paper.
How it works: Send me what you have — text, outline, voice memo, doesn't matter. I review it and give you actionable feedback. First call is free so we can see if we're a good fit.
Portfolio available upon request. Happy to do a test assignment in your genre.