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Thank you so much!! And truuuuuu, all my homies hate Aldon, lol. 

SO COOL! The writing, lore, and creature are amazing. 🤘

The art is absolutely gorgeous. Got me zooming in 600% on my biggest monitor to take in all the details and texture, lol. And I love your writing!! Amazing entry 🤘

Very cool! Especially love the art, layout, and the texture the pages have~

I would have missed the poem on the project page too if not for UnitSix's comment. Def deserves to be featured as a second page to your art~!

Love the little twist at the end, that would be such a cool reveal in game. Well done! 🤘

Thanks!! Oh, the forbidden knowledge was the d4 table of secrets, but I could have kept the language similar to make that more clear and so it didn't feel like something was missing. Thanks for the feedback! ^_^

Whhooaaahhh this is so sick!!!!! The colors really pop! The title font is insane. Love the concept of someone locked away in eternal suffering to keep Anthelia alive. TAKE ALL MY STARS 🙌

Love the layout and art! The blurbs of text coming out of the light of the lantern are such a nice touch. Props for the title too, always appreciate a play on words, lol.

Got me craning my neck to take it all in, lol. I could totally picture this as a really long fold-out poster that comes with the books. Love it, great job!

Love the design choices!! In a sea of yellow and pink, it is very nice to get a cool teal, especially fitting for Kergüs. The font choice and organization are great, very easy for the eye to follow and read. I appreciate that the text is highlightable on the pdf, and that you included a blank map for the players. The writing is FANTASTIC, very evocative, so many neat details. Overall really awesome job!! 🤘

Actually obsessed with the serial killer handwriting version, lol. Is it a scan of arranged pieces of paper? I love all of the texture it adds. And it makes it feel tangible, like some npc wrote it all down to warn people about The Wet Knuckle after they escaped. Very fun entry! 

LOVE the setup and the plot twist for this once the truth is revealed. Very cool!!

Oooooh love the concept of scavengers who are specifically looking for basilisk corpses, very cool. Dig the art too! Great job~! 

Never would I have thought the description of a hymn as "wet" could be so creepy, lol.  And "a song like suffocating on your own blood"!??? Love, love, love the writing on this. Great job! 💀🤘

I agree with the other commenter, specifically I think he could make a cool traveling merchant akin to Mikhael in Heretic. :3

Thank you for the feedback! This was my first time writing something with a statblock for the game, so I kept it fairly standard, but thank you for the encouragement to branch out and experiment a little more. There was more that I wanted to add in general, but I started running out of space (and time! I started working on my entry on Sunday, lol). Thank you again for the kind words~!

Frustrating in a fun way, I was screaming at my laptop, lol. The art is awesome, so cute, and the music is great. 2182 is my high score! ^_^

I see some people saying they "didn't get to" the quick time event, so I think a short tutorial screen would be useful in case people miss the instructions in the description. And I wish the gun were further back so that I could point-blank shoot trees. It took me a minute to realize I wasn't hitting them, lol. Also I would love an accessibility option to hold down the fire button to shoot, since button-mashing is hard on my joints.

Overall really enjoyed it. Great job~! :3

AHH THANK YOU! This is my first time trying out something like this, so that is very encouraging!🤘

TAKE ALL MY BLEAKNESS STARS. I think my favorite part was the descriptions of the deaths in succession; so simple, yet so effective. Really great writing!

Love seeing some biblically accurate angel representation in the Dying Lands. Very awe-inspiring. Also, I wish I could give bonus stars for presentation because your cover image and project page are just gorgeous!!!

A relic like this could create a really interesting narrative with the calendar set to something high stakes! Imagine it being only 'a cruel month' or 'the end is nigh!' and your character choosing their one wish but dooming the world. Very cool! 🤘

This is so sick! Love the passage, the arrangement of the text, and the art is INSANE. Great job.