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The writing is really good don't get me wrong, nothing about it was "bad" However I expected something different. You get to choose your characters skintone, pronouns and even body type but the writing breaks your immersion. It says how you feel, what you think, and small personality based things that makes it feel like its not even your own character and someone completely different. Even NSFW scenes force you to play a certain way and despite having choices it just feels very linear. I loved the art, the POV actions, and even the worldbuilding/characters but it was tough to play through this. I really wanted to love this game :(

It seems the game isent working properly. I just get random text blocks with no words, hopefully you can fix it soon! I looked at your story chart and it was very intriguing.

I enjoyed Death and Taxes more than I thought I would when I played it (One hour turned into 10 somehow) so I'm expecting another gem from you all x3x

This looks so interesting, but I want to wait for the full version I'm so conflicted AHHHH

You had me at sex alien hot or whatever you said I'm a bit distracted now

I love your art so much <3 i never thought I'd see you making a game with otome and yuri! I'm so excited.  ฅ՞•ﻌ•՞ฅ

Calling it right now, this secret Oscar is hiding is whatever makes his chicken so finger lickin' good

AHHHHH OH MY GOD IM SO EXCITED

Shocked this beautiful game doesn't have more attention?! I don't usually play games till they are finished but I might just have to download this and see how it is <3

I tried to continue but tapping doesn't do anything. Once im finished im just stuck here

Me next! ❤️ I love this couple so much they are my favorite

So I don't usually test out games before they are completed because im super impatient so this is a outlier. This gams wont work for me though ☹️ I customize my character and nothing happens

Very fun, I failed so hard at the end I'm so bad at these games lol but I enjoyed exploring and the overall aesthetic of the game. I hope in the final product it has a co-op option, I'd love to play this with friends. Also would be cool to have some voice acting but its fine if not!

Hey I was trying to buy something you posted in a game jam but it looks like you restricted it :(

Love the futa addition, cant wait to see more. Hopefully one day you'll be able to make a game where a girl goes around and fucks, would love to see that

No no don't be sorry! I'm glad you took the time to type out a throughout response! its shame that you have all of those obstacles though. I wish i could help somehow! Unfortunately I'm poor as well and I'm just starting to take art classes to learn how to illustrate.  I'll still support you however i can!

That's understandable! Maybe staring a Kickstarter or Paetron could help? I'm sure there are many people who would love to see your unique visual novel idea to life!

Okay I don't usually read Kinetic Visual novels but I'm a pervert so ill keep on eye on this one UwU

That's awesome! As you can probably tell, I'm not a man but I am really interested in this Vr experience 😊 

This might be a dumb question but since this is a gay NSFW vr game dose the main character ever mention the player is a male?

My main interest in the game is the romance! Though, I'm also really interested in the choices and the story as well.

This looks amazing! I cant wait for its release :D

Game keeps closing on me for some reason

A really unique game, I only wish there was like a new game plus or something instead of playing through again to see a different outcome.

Experience Isent a problem. My team needs a 3D artist for environmental and character perpouses. 

The position(s) is unpaid as the game is a camp project and will be free. 

You are more than welcome to join our team! We were planning to use free unity assets for the game but it deserves better than that. 

The games description is pretty lengthy so message me if you are interested. 

This is my first post on here so I apologize if it's all over the place. 

LORD HAVE MERCY these men are beautiful 

I'm tempted to ask if you could potentially develop a relationship/friendship with your acolyte.

Yay! That's awesome I can't wait to see it :) thank you for answering my question! 

Okay thanks for letting me know :)

Hi! I love your visual novels, the art and writing are amazing :) I was wondering...do you plan on making a otome in the future?

Dose the protagonist have a certain gender?

Is the Pregnancy System part of the game or can it be toggled off?

I understand and see where you are coming from. But yeah there's not much room to get too deep in a short story, nevertheless they did a good job in creating a little tension and intimacy. Especially the voice actresses, they really put so much emotion into their dialogs.

Yeah I felt the same, I'm used to choice based visual novels but i liked this kinetic one.

Id rate this 5 stars if I could, the concept and theme of this visual novel was super uniqe. The art had a dreamy feel to it which went lovely with the story. I was surprised that this had both voice acting and animation, both of which were equally amazing. Ive never really took the time to write a story, i always get too pessimistic to continue because of how much of a perfectionist I am. I can relate to the MC slightly, and I really admire that since of relatability. The struggles and internal conflict that Seraphina faces was nice insight to the troubles that a writer faces sometimes. I never knew that some story writers had this problem and its amazing how you wove this theme into a beautiful story. The love interests have adorable quirks and lovable personality traits that made me feel emotionally attached to them and to see that their love goes beyond the story was really sweet. There is a lot of other nice things that I could say but id probably end up repeating myself, so if you haven't read this story yet I recommend you do. You wont regret it! And if you're the creator, thank you for sharing this personal story with us :)