I JUST PLAYED IT AND WHEN I GOT THE THE END SCREEN I CRIED SO HARD?!?!
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Oh, it's nothing major! I doubt many people would mind (it's just that my grammar buff brain caught it, lol). I didn't get screenshots for everything, but I do have two!
"Yet things has gone sideways when the prince you were to supposed to protect are cursed" should be "yet things go sideways when the prince you were supposed to protect is cursed"
I also have this:
"If you were to die, you'd like it if your funeral are filled with" should instead be "If you were to die, you'd like it if your funeral is filled with". Also, you switched the tenses in the sentence " You stood in the doorway." From what you previously wrote, I got the impression that it should have been present tense instead of past, so it would be "You stand in the doorway."
The grammatical errors I found tend to come up when you use "are" for sentences and transitions that should have "is" instead. There were also times when the tense would ping pong between the present tense and the past tense.
But don't let what I've said drag you down. Your writing is vivid and very immersive! This wip has great potential and I'm excited to see where it goes next! A few grammatical mistakes isn't the end of the world and, seeing as this is a beta demo, are to be expected! Have a great day/evening/night!
Then, here's a wild idea- don't play it. If you don't like the game, you don't need to go into the comments and have a little b*tch fest- just do what us regular schmegular joes do and don't play it.
I've just played this game, and I gotta say, I really love it! I'm a sucker for management games, and I love how involved we are in this one. The main character is also really witty and smart (we love girlbosses in this house). Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to more!! :D
This game is honestly so cool? I've been struggling with my gender for a while (I identify as Pangender but I'm still unsure) but I don't really have many people who I can talk about this to irl, so this game was pretty cathartic for me! Great game!!
I've been really excited for the twine demo of this game ever since I ran into the demo on tumblr, and it didn't disappoint! The UI is so pretty, and so is the art! Though, I just have one question: How do I input custom pronouns? Edit: Oh wait, crap, nvm, I'm just a dumb dumb. Great game! :D
Oh my god, this is so wholesome and cute?? As an aroflux person, I hardly ever see QPP's in media-even in other queer media- so this warmed my heart. Also, the characters?? Chef's kiss, they're both so warm and cuddly!
This was a really great game! (Unseelie fae queens are for smooching~) though, something weird happened to me- I only bought the dagger with me once, though on the third time I was forced to?
oH MY GOD YES- This was just so incredibly satisfying. I remember reading the myth of Orpheus and Eurydice as a kid and being like "Wait, that isn't fair!". Thank you for giving me the closure I never knew I needed- ;-;
There's only going to be step 4, which is the end of the main game( at least, the part of the game that doesn't involve buying the dlcs.) I don't think you can marry cove in step 4, since that's a seperate DLC.
As a bisexual person of color, thank you for making me feel seen. This game...it touched me, pretty emotionally. Like, it summed up all these fears I've had about calling myself bisexual and all these self doubts that I've never managed to express out loud. ( I also have a preference for masc presenting people so yeah, that screws with my head a lot) And don't get me started on how many people consider queerness as a whole to be "white people crap" which is just stupid on so many levels since pre-colonized countries have been historically known to embrace queerness-andddd I'm rambling now.
TL;DR: Thank you for this game.